Eyes

Team Renfield-

Glances given with hazy guise

Confusing, leaving much to chance

For denial may desire disguise

Should I, or not, dare this dance?

 

Eyes entice like a magnetic pole

speaking straight to the naked soul

there’s much to learn yet still for me

of this mystical vast dictionary

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

there’s much to learn yet still for me
of this mystical vast dictionary

I really love this part, This is a very well written write here. Amazing!!....

[Mockingbird]

sometimes there is a stranger that gazes into your eyes, with the look of an invitation. but those of us who are timid don't know how to interpret these gestures and perhaps bow out of the game for fear of looking foolish.

[Closedown]

Ooh, brilliant form, one I haven't heard of before too. Love it! Renfieldians unite!

[Ed Hart]

to me, these individual gems of yours are a on going reaffirmation of the brotherhood of 'seeing'

[TAO]

I like what you're doing here. I'm a fan of free form, but, I've begun to find something liberating in the constraints of a set form; being forced to think creatively, outside the box despite the rigid demands of a structure, there's much freedom in that. I think you've captured it very well in this piece. Your work is to be admired by all.

[Norma M Sutton]

I like it.

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. i'm telling you ... you know too much ... i can tell ... from your eyes ... an exquisite piece of poetry ... just beautiful ...