Monologue

Monologue

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
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Longueur- WOTD #1

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It’s time to tell you

Your monologues with me are

My day’s longueur part



© 2011 Wondering Mind


Author's Note

Wondering Mind
Still rusty---Like I've always been :p



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don't know what longeurs is, but this is a good write

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wondering Mind

4 Years Ago

It means a tedious period of time. Thanks for your review
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longueurs ~ a new word....
this short poem, speaks volume... now heading off...lol ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


seems like you find someone's chatter a little tedious, makes me think of an educated person using vocabulary to insult someone without them being non the wiser. you cad! nice write. enjoyed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


don't know what longeurs is, but you probably knew that... i suppose it could be something positive. you have a highly sophisticated lexicon. i am humbled.

Posted 12 Years Ago


longueurs describes the emotional intent perfectly, a feeling of comfort
within the slow passing of time, this poem is a reflection of it's own nature,
a characterization of the senyrus that you bring into existence,
speaks volumes, captures a memory and a lifetime, beautiful work ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


hmph! *storming off*

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah. There you go. ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's ok. I've been scraping the rust of my sword too. ;)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 25, 2011
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