Haiku X

the crescent moon,

admiring the setting sun

reclines on a cloud

Reviews

[Michael X]

haiku portrait, this is mind expanding, your words opens the readers thoughts and eyes to the moonlit sky,
i love where the subtle passion transports the imagination, presenting a form of graceful charm,
its peaceful, the moon resting on a cloud, i see this as timeless, and classic, as well as the title.
dreamy in a visual, colorful way, pastel reflections, leaves heart sailing to another world, lovely.

[James Paulin]

After enjoying many of your poems, I have to applaud and applaud.

[Eunice Crankyponts]

Perfect and beautiful

[Olivera]

I love this one! Totally perfect; like a painting in words.

[M. Amphet Salt]

Very good. Obey the laws of the Haiku, and paints beautiful imagery in ones mind. Nicely done.

[Lyra H]

Simple and beautiful...