Two Souls

Two Souls

A Poem by wordman
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two souls searching in the night

two wrongs dosen`t make a right

 

but your searching for solace

where there is none to find

 

your paths cross your hearts meet

your eyes are blind you enter

with in one another

 

your hearts entwine

you become as one

 

your souls make love

the solace you find

 

fate is wonderful

love is blind

© 2017 wordman


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Sad yet very beautiful Ron...much like many of your works my friend. Be blessed in all you do! ~Sharon P.S. I also love everything Kenny G plays and have SO many of his albums.

Posted 7 Months Ago


 wordman

7 Months Ago

thank you for the review
Aw, this is so bittersweet, when someone mind and heart is closed to real love. Before them. Made me want to cry.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Dawn

2 Years Ago

Well i for one. Love your poetry Ron. You have a glorious spirit about you Ron.
 wordman

2 Years Ago

thanks dawn
Dawn

2 Years Ago

my pleasure. Ron.
So true that fate is wonderful and love is blind. Sometimes people just don't have what it takes to allow love into their life.. Excellent write..

Posted 3 Years Ago


 wordman

3 Years Ago

only true love can be shared,it must be from the soul and heart..thank you tracy
Like this
Very special
Write some more

Posted 3 Years Ago


 wordman

3 Years Ago

glad you like it,thank you
Loved this beautiful poem on love, life and destiny. Indeed, soul mates have to have fate on their side, if ever they have to find one another.

Posted 3 Years Ago


 wordman

3 Years Ago

thank you,my first poem on w/c
DIVYA

3 Years Ago

Appreciated and treasured so much...
wordman,
"Two souls" is a poem of thankfulness! Even in an imperfect world these two find strength somehow in one another. "souls searching in the night, two wrongs doesn't make a right.........searching for solace where there is none to find...hearts meet.. the solace you find." Solace is a good word and I see it used twice. It surly describes the hope we all share................Blessings, Kathy

Posted 4 Years Ago


 wordman

4 Years Ago

thank you kathy,appreciate the visit
Kathy Van Kurin

4 Years Ago

You are welcome! It was nice to read your work.
Doing rereads. Please get your fingers around that pen and start writing. Valentine

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tony Jordan

3 Years Ago

had a wicked sense of humour too when she was in the mood. She liked you - liked to rib you.
.. read more
 wordman

3 Years Ago

yeah,i miss her,always wanted me to write something
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yes it is! :) and sometimes it really does work out that way ... a nice simple love song ...with a happy ending ..pleasant read ..yes indeed! ;)
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

thank you for reading,appreciate the review
"fate is wonderful, love is blind" that's how you end a great piece of poetry Ron, simply beautiful
words, amd the great Kenny G, would be the icing on this cake. Vey cool, Thanka EG.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 wordman

5 Years Ago

thank you my friend ! appreciate the kind words

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