Your my inspiration

You are my inspiration

you are my muse

as we dance across the floor

my ink spills like tears from my heart

I write of love

I write of pain

I wonder what joy

tomorrow will bring

Your love

inspires me to write on

and I write of your love

as we dance on

dance,dance across my mind

my ink spilling on paper

as we dance through time

inspire me my darling

as the ink pours from my pen

there is no beginning

there is no end...

Reviews

[WoodenChair]

man, why on earth would you be holding ink when you're dancing with someone?

[wordman]

so i could spill it on her blouse and she would have to take it off,why else

[Poetic License]

Aaaannndddd, you have done it all over again. Yup, I am a puddle of mush.

I am a huge fan of the way you wove a hint of the forlorn into this piece.

"my ink spills like tears from my heart"

Words are the poet's last rites of love, so to speak, we commit them to paper, our attempt to preserve the moment, the dance, the emotion, the everything beautiful of that singular love.

This is fabulous, perhaps one of my new favorites.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit ! never could find the site,computer illiterate,lol

[pia]

"I write of love
I write of pain
I wonder what joy
tomorrow will bring"
This read like a song !!!!i love it
But as advice shouldn't the title be "you're my inspiration"
Anyway.
I love the emotions you've portrayed here. A writer sometimes goes through times of utter dryness. Were we cant think of anything to jot down and pour our emotions into. We as writers love looking around this colourless world to find happiness and find hidden colours to bring out our passions. Those passions inspire us to write. And that is what makes your poem so special and well written.

[wordman]

and i appreciate your review

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching and heartfelt piece that guides one in emotion and clarity of description, well done, good read.

[wordman]

thank you thomas

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmmmbeautiful love poem ...reading has inspired me to seek one particular muse ... i can't say i really have one ... seems many different things spark the noodle ... some i catch on to and others simply slip away ... your speaker is a lucky man to have such a fountain of youth in loving his lady ... the commitment in your closing lines is divine says i!
E.

[wordman]

thank you mr noodle

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ...................

[Weeping willow]

Beautiful expression flows through into a marvelous dance of words;-]

[wordman]

thank you weeping willow

[TeeJae {TJ} Hart]

Gorgeous poem may the ink continue to pour long after the last dance

[wordman]

may the ink and the poets pen have no end,,thank you for reading my humble work

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

This has a flavor of Romeo and Juliet.....gorgeous poetry!

[wordman]

thank you jane,never thought about romeo and juliet

[Cherry Pepperweb]

I love that song. Wonderful poem. Our love can inspire beautiful poetry, sometimes sad words too though.
Your poem is like a song.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit