You Knew

If ever

you see my face,

in the spring,

or in the fall;

 during a gentle rain

when a flower blooms,

or a tree bursts forth its fruit,

think of me:

Remember,

that I loved you,

even though

I never told you.

But you knew,

you could feel my love,

in the falling dew

of the morning sun.

you knew.

You gave me peace,

you touched my soul,

you knew,

that I loved you so ...

Reviews

[emmajoy]

You gave me peace, - you touched my soul, - you knew, that I loved you so ...'

Such sadly beautiful words. Tis as much a song as a poem. Could be played by candle light, guitar softly touched.. echoes gently trilling the lightly room.. can almost see it. Romantic!

[wordman]

thank you emmajoy for the sweet review,you painted a lovely picture .

[JayceeC]

Such a romantic touching poem. Love shows through actions louder than in a few words that could be nothing more than lip service. When some one is well loved, the words don't seem rho matter.

[wordman]

thank you jc,just on tonight listening to music !not sure if the`re just not silly love poems

[JayceeC]

In the lyrical words of Paul McCartney, "People want to fill the world with silly love songs, but what's wrong with that?"

[Miss Sharon]

Be still my beating heart! This is so beautifully romantic and well written Ron. I think it would make a beautiful love song. ~Sharon

[wordman]

sharon,you can sing it ! i will be the audience ,thank you much

[Miss Sharon]

I will compose it tonight...if I can find the time! ~Your friend Sharon

[wordman]

i can`t wait !

[Pryde Foltz]

Sublime and delightful, Ron. A gorgeous write.

[wordman]

thank you pryde !

[Daisy]

hmm such nice words..... good job

[wordman]

thank you for the visit daisy

[Lynda]

Bittersweet memories...remember that I loved you, even though I never told you...

[wordman]

thank you for the visit .

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah, this is beautiful. Excellent poetry. Thanks for sharing. Love is somethin you can't write enough about. Rating 100#

[wordman]

thank you danny

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome :)

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Vulnerable and sweet a poem from the heart....a nice pen!

[wordman]

a nice comment,thank you

[Sultrysoul]

You gave me peace you touched my soul...the ultimate contentment

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Sultrysoul]

You are very welcome

[Neville]

I hope she knew and if he didn't know then, I hope she finds this beautiful romantic tribute to her & falls in love again.... All Good Things, Neville

[wordman]

thank you neville,she does now ! lol