You Knew

If ever

you see my face,

in the spring,

or in the fall;

 during a gentle rain

when a flower blooms,

or a tree bursts forth its fruit,

think of me:

Remember,

that I loved you,

even though

I never told you.

But you knew,

you could feel my love,

in the falling dew

of the morning sun.

you knew.

You gave me peace,

you touched my soul,

you knew,

that I loved you so ...

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

Nice work Wordman and I see you are being visited of late

[wordman]

thank you,i love ole tk 47 reviews and 27 comment reviews i was taking up for blitz
and nisreenaa when out of the woods a walking teard came along lol

[Perkele.7885]

A very nice piece here wordman.

[wordman]

thank you raj

[Valentine]

Very nice write, I especially love the last 4 lines. Very romantic prose. Valentine

[wordman]

thank you,that seems to be the kicker
looked at the new poetry site,i may like it

[Valentine]

Like I told you, I am on 4.

[wordman]

well i am active on 2 you would like starlite poetry it has music and backgrounds

[Valentine]

I was on starlight for years. I erased my writes but still get read requests. I may have to check it out again. kathie

[B]

Loving a person
is all about respect
And all about protecting their boundaries as a person
Learning that everyone has the right to live with much freedom to express everything politely
and to stop when inflicting pain on others in any shape or form

Your write is one of respect towards a loved one
in public and private

Thank you for continuing to write

[wordman]

thank you for your visit,

[B]

Its my pleasure wordman
If you ever need anything
Just call out

[AaronFreitas]

"You gave me peace, you touched my soul." I love those two lines. Funny what someone can do to makes us feel certain ways. Good work :)

[wordman]

yes my friend it`s funny how words can touch us thanks

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

You captured the very sense of romance in the way you sequecially arrange your wordings. Though simple, yet captivating. How you blend love and nature. This poem is good. Mr. Wordman. Well written.

[wordman]

thank you for your visit

[silent poet]

Very touching, sweet and loving poem!

[wordman]

thank you very much camille

[silent poet]

You're welcome :)

[jeannemarie coulter]

well written and a pleasant read, however, in the following lines

"or in the fall

Are during a gentle rain"

and the song...ahhhhhhhhhhhh....

i would place a comma after "fall" and cut the "are" , i think it would read more smoothly if you did...thank you for the inspiring vision...jc

[wordman]

thank you,i am ignorant lol

[jeannemarie coulter]

do you ever read your words to other poets at a gathering...this often helps me to get the word flow just right...