Last Train to Georgia

Last train to Georgia

do i board

or stay here with you

i need someone to tell me what to do

I don`t know any more

i really don`t know how i feel

was it ever love

was it ever real

I am confused

in my own mind

you have run me down so much

i think i`m blind

I really don`t know

who i am anymore

i`m afraid to make a decision

i`m really not sure

Would it really be me

it seems i was a different person years ago

but it`s been so long

i really don`t know

If i board

or if i stay

would it be the right decision

if i made it today

How much longer can i wait

the train is boarding at the gate

not sure who i am anymore

it may already be to late...

Reviews

[E G TEN]

Get on board my friend, always... if not meant to be you can
Always jump off, might hurt a bit, but at least you gave it shot!
Nice write Mr. Word, very cool Thanks.

[wordman]

thank you my friend

[Fran Marie]

Decisions, decisions..sometimes it just better and less complicated to flip a coin..

[wordman]

yeah,or don`t get married or date lol

[Fran Marie]

Yep, I kno what you mean..

[SCRIBBLER]

This is a great example of decision making and reminds me of times when Im anywhere. Whether I'm at a them park or somewhere else. This dilemma always finds it way to me. Lovely Write. Keep inspiring Us.

[wordman]

scribbler,glad to see you my friend

[SCRIBBLER]

Thanks Wordman

[Cherry Pepperweb]

This is one I can feel. Should I stay or go?
Been there. Nice job.

[wordman]

thank you cherry pepper,we all have i`m sure

[Indra Neil]

the dilemma is powerfully conveyed in this wonderful write! well done! :)
you might consider to edit 'allready' (already) and 'to' (too) late in the last line

[wordman]

thank you indra

[Indra Neil]

u r welcome! :)

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The worst part of not making a decision, is not making a decision :) once you decide, life moves on. I always feel like I'm growing afterwards. Nice work, Ron!

[wordman]

thank you lynn !

[....................]

such a dilemma...every time I hear the word Georgia i can't help but think of Ray Charles... nice work, Ron

[wordman]

love ole ray,thanks kelly is a georgia girl

[jeannemarie coulter]

fine penning, thanks for sharing

[wordman]

thanks for visiting

[jeannemarie coulter]

i visit often...i enjoy your words

[wordman]

and here i thought you had wrote me off lol

[jeannemarie coulter]

never, i was down with what they call an opportunistic infection and writing more than reading...i like your mix of words and music very much

[wordman]

i hope you get well soon,mr david demers aka tk little has made comments and sent messages making people believe it was from me.even opened an account using my real name and photo charlie closed it

[Terry O'Leary]

"He who hesitates is lost"...
Nice poem!

[wordman]

just a poem,fiction,thank you

[Viv Wade]

Really sums up what it's like to be on the horns of a dilemma - should I stay or should I go? Good job!

[wordman]

thank you silent