No One Will Ever Love You Like I Do

If you read "You" by me. This poem is about the same guy.

We are together tonight
My world moves slowly
But my breathin' gets tight...

I can only imagine how you feel
Your arm around me

Don't tell me your not needed
Don't tell me your not special
Don't tell me I don't love you
Because that's not true...

I can see in your eyes
I see me
I see love and kindness
For me...

Don't tell me
It's wrong what I'm feelin'
Because that's not true...

No one will ever love you
Like I do
No one will ever see you as I do
No one will ever wait for you
Like I will

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

No One Will Ever Love You Like I Do
This is appaarently a song by the same name.
It is full of emotion, intense, playful , fun,
sedctive, sensual, fraught with promise.
You are a gifted writer, not the most
demonstrative, but technically excellent.
Thank You
-----Eagle Cruagh

[Aly]

yes it is a song but its called "No One Will Ever Love You" and I was indeed inspired by it and i mentioned this song in one of the reviews down below. But thank you. Much appericated,

[James William Dyer]

Nice display of devotion. As song lyrics, I think it's great. As poetry, needs some imagery, some textual architecture

[Aly]

Thanks. Much appericated

[RoxelanasDream]

Can I just say awwww? I can feel the emotions your trying to express. Compassion. Devotion. "But my breathin' gets tight" reminds me so much of how I felt with my ex. I also tend to get the vibe of fear that your love might not be truly conveyed with how he tells you all you feel for him is not true. But truly his eyes can't lie when they reflect love just like your own. I just hope he learns to trust more on what he feels because only a person who truly loves someone denies it at first and sees whats freely given later. Love makes us vulnerable and fools indeed.

[Aly]

:) Thank you.

[s y e]

Wow!
Your amazing! This was beautiful!

[Aly]

Thank you :)
Also inspired by the TV Show "Nashville" the song that helped inspire this was "No One Will Ever Love You" thank you so much :)

[Aly]

At the time I was trying to write a song, but I think I'm better at Poetry

[s y e]

Oh yeah! You have such good song choices haha. :) loved it!!

[s y e]

You should post a song. I've written a couple of songs but I'm too scared to post them -hides- haha :P

[Aly]

Thank you! :) Greatly appericated

[Aly]

I haven't really wrote a song, haha. You should post yours! Give me some insight on how to do it! Haha.

[Aly]

Actually this is the closest thing I have to a "song" haha

[s y e]

Oh you haven't? Give it try! I bet it'll great!
Ok, I'll post tomorrow then haha :P but don't get your hopes up lol...

[Aly]

Lol. I'll have to get some serious inspiration soon! Lol lol. Yes! she's publishing because of ME! :D

[s y e]

It is? That's not bad!! I bet when I post my song you'll be like OMG rofl :P haha

[s y e]

I bet mine will be the funniest 'song' ever haha. Yes I am:P haha

[Aly]

Lol lol! Yeah this is the only "song" I've ever wrote haha. You know I could use a laugh ;)

[s y e]

Well I'm pretty sure mine will make you laugh! I wrote it when I was 8. It's kind of a lullaby. Hehe.

[Aly]

Oooh I'm excited now! *Claps*

[Aly]

Well I think I have some more songs, but I'm not entirely sure...haha.

[s y e]

You post a song and I will post one as well :D

[Aly]

Ok go post one. I did my part ;) hahahaha

[s y e]

Tomorrow cause I don't have it on my iPod, got a new iPod for Xmas so everything is on my computer now. Promise tomorrow! I guess you did Bahahaha :-D

[Aly]

Lol. I had a really good one! It was inspired by Britney Spears "Oops I did it again" but I can't find it! Grr! But i found another that's poem-like and song-like at the same time. So Ima posting it! :D

[s y e]

Hahaha! Omg! You have to try find it!!! Pretty please haha.
Ooooo! Yes do post! I shall read :-D

[Aly]

Lol. I'm trying to find it! But so far no succes!

[s y e]

Awww :( Bummer!

[Aly]

I know :(

[s y e]

:'(. -cries silent tears- that sucks

[Aly]

Yes it does!

[s y e]

Awwwwwww.

[Aly]

:(

[s y e]

Hopefully you will. Keep looking Hun!!!