All of Me

You only see what I allow you to see

If I let you see all of me

Would you still love me ?

I know there are things I don't know about you

You have secrets

All of us do

If you knew all about me

Would you still love me

All the mistakes I've made

All the choices I've made

The way of Life I've seen

Would things still be the same

I can't make you

Be here for me

I can't make that choice

I've fallen so hard

Sometimes things are better unsaid

I'm still in love with you

But if your dreams are the same as mine.

Maybe someday I'll share this story of mine

Author's Note

Another Poem about J :) :) :)

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

This is wonderful. (: He's a lucky guy. ;)

[Mir]

Oh, Ally. I really enjoyed this! And I feel this way all the time, but not towards a lover. Just friends and Family in general. This poem is great because even if you're not in a relationship or want to be in one, you can still relate to it! :)

[Aly]

I strive to "relateable" :) :)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

boy lot of poem's to J. lolz. whatever the mistakes will happen but you can learn from your mistakes. It's part of life. I loved this 100/100

[Aly]

Thank you :)
Well J has created a lot of inspiration for me lately.

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:) that's good

[Lucy Morningstar &heart..]

ok lol u and j seriously need to be together! holy cow, the emotion here is just so...uggh i can't even describe it. It's amazing! another awesome poem!!!

[Aly]

Lol. I really do like him. I do wanna get together with him, but I also don't want to pressure him.

[Lucy Morningstar ♥]

ok...does he like you?

[Aly]

I dunno. . . .maybe.

[quinfinn]

those lingering, nagging questions about commitment and revelations...such a torrid and difficult dilemma. well versed and nicely done.

[Aly]

thank you so much :)

[Leigh]

Well written and very well expressed. The emotion comes through in this

[Aly]

thank you :) much appericated

[Leigh]

:-)

[Michael Stevens]

Another excellent poem!

[Aly]

thank you :) :)

[Nate]

very good

[Aly]

thanks :)