NSA Science (Senryu)

They are listening

do you hear buzzing

nano technology's new

how are you feeling

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

oooh this made me need to look behind me lol
Horrible thought that they are listening whoever they are!
Such a fun write!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you young lady. It did bring me laughter too as I wrote it. Another writer had been discussing Sci Fi stuff and I mentioned the Nanobots and here came this piece.

[R Smith]

science huh! can't live with it can't live (in peace) without it, something buzzing in my head made me say that haha, love this one Will, a poem for the future i'm sure it'll be a number one hit in the pop charts about 2323 say lol, great writing my friend......well if you wrote it and not one of those Bot's.......

[Willard Wells]

Nanobots are already with us. The future is here. The evolution of the Nanobots in 2323 will not matter as by then we will all be controlled by them. Thanks for visiting and I hope you had fun.

[mattavelli]

Self-replicating nanobots in the water... There to keep our teeth white...

[Willard Wells]

But they are still listening even as they clean. Beware. Thanks for stopping over.

[KWP]

who's listening? where? and in which reality are you talking about? if it's your reality you will have to give me a few moments seeings as we just met and all ... buzzing you say ... wait, wait, I hear something of sorts .. is it buzzing, is it bee's ... can't be bees surely I am not in my garden .. oh hang on .. its coming from inside my computer ... oh god now my screen has gone all 1's and 0's .... i can't read it ... I can't understand ... waaaaittttttt .... there's a message if I just blurr my eyes up I see it clear as day ....


'You are not alone'

ahh well I already knew that ... X

[Willard Wells]

Funny lady. Nice. Thanks for the read and comment. I was just in a goofy mood.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Excellent senyru with a purposeful question Willard!

[Willard Wells]

I had one of those momentary burst of thought and this was within that so I wrote. So much a poet writes is love and death. I think I need to do more fun pieces with laughter. We can never have too much laughter. Thank you kind sir for your words of encouragement.

[Marie]

I thought I was hearing bees...

[Willard Wells]

It may be bees, but the NSA is working to hear us. Be safe, don't think to loud. Thanks for visiting and commenting Marie.

[ANTO]

Tiny little nanobots will be mingling with the flies and bugs of the world soon enough and self replicating and self repairing too - using all kinds of sensors - love this Will. Right up my street, my friend. Cool.

[Willard Wells]

Anto, I thought it might appeal to you. I am not a big sci fi writer, but I may have to play around with something. Just for fun. Glad you enjoyed it my friend. We are starting to see the acceptance of nanobots with the larger big brother drones. Now if we could build a nanobot army of miniature Nanobots and send them into the mist of ISL. We will change the collective. Your thoughts will be controlled by us. Thank you for reading and the review.

[~]

Ohhh no.. in that case (whispers**) I cannot hear any buzzing yet, i might need a hearing aide ;)
awesome! :D

[Willard Wells]

You will only hear them if they are close to your inner ear. For the most part they are silent. Working efficiently within your body, making gradual changes. You will not know once you have been ............. Thank you so much for reviewing my work.

[~]

You are always welcome :D