Spring Ice Ride

Alaska Ice

arctic spring arrives

like cubes of ice floating by

seals jumping on chucks

of ice floating by to get 

rest from the polar bear chase

Reviews

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an entertaining look at a moment between seals, polar bear and ice floe...

[Willard Wells]

Your right about floe. I had ride there and changed it and I don't like it either spelling. I am going to re-work the final word on both lines. Thanks and check back some time and see what you think.

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you could use "pan"... we call them ice pans...

[Willard Wells]

Already done over. Life or death. wait and see. LOL

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Its really very icy and beautiful my friend. I enjoyed...

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for visiting my work and commenting. It is greatly appreciated.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend!