Sleepy Time

sleep

when you close your eyes

catching light beams flashing by

do you grab a ride

Reviews

[Rudi J.P. Lejaeghere]

It's difficult to write short poems like this, but I think you're very good in it, Willard. Well done. :) Rudi

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for your kind words Rudi.

[Robert]

Such few words here Willard but expressed so well. I think most of us have seen that flashing lights. Never thought of hitching a ride but you never know.

[Willard Wells]

The ride takes me to deep sleep or a Zen like state. Catch it. Thanks for reading and commenting.

[Perkele.7885]

another piece of 3 line genius
good subject matter delivered with "Air Wells"

[Willard Wells]

The subject is easy with my muse near me to inspire me in love. I appreciate your visit and kind words.

[JayceeC]

This is a wonderful piece. I think star beams instead of light beams suit t
The title better, but either was it captures dreamtime magic.

[Willard Wells]

Thanks JC for your time and review. I am glad you liked it.

[sereenaoutloud]

Love this
I reminded me of when you close your eyes and see those little specks like stars and if you focus on them they come towards you!! Or am i the only weirdo that see that? lol
Either way great write! :)

[Willard Wells]

Many strange thing can be seen as we close our eyes. Thank you for your kind words and visiting.

[Cherry Pepperweb]

The title grabbed me. It made me think of sleepy time tea.
This is an adorable little poem, the image of the flashing lights going by and grabbing on...
Made me think of a head full of dreams and picking on to grab onto for the night. :)
I liked your poem!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much Pepper. I also thought of the tea as I wrote it. And sometime my mind is going so fast and I am looking for sleep and I look for that moment to grab on and head to sleep.

[Cherry Pepperweb]

I hear you there... :)

[tonganknight]

I like it. It says allot by saying a little.

[Willard Wells]

Thank you so much for stopping by and being the first to read my moments ago write and completion. Fast process. Haha Glad you enjoyed.