Help Me

A poem..

Hit me,
Kick me,
Slap me
Across the
Face,

Scream at me,
Yell at me,
Tell me I’m a
Waste of space,

Do something,
Make me feel
Something,
Even if it’s
Pain,

I need to feel
Something,
Know that I’m
Alive,
So I can ease
This fain

But I need to
Feel something
Because I have no gain.

I’ve been so
Numb,
For so long,
I just need to
Feel.

I need to feel something,
Please help me heal.

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

truly heart-wrenching, use of imagery exquisitely captured the emotions one is dealing with when having to face this horrific torture. as usual your incredible talent in your choice of words, rhyme and fluidity is astounding! wonderfully penned, Adriana :)

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Thank you so much..

[ms. barrie]

verily welcome, need coffee, then slowly getting back into reviewing!

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Okay, cool.. :)

[Bound In Red]

Such powerful writing.. I love this one so much.

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Thanks...

[KillerWithWords]

First up-great job on the poem.

Second- You paired up the words numb and pain and i can't imagine a more contrasting idea.
Yes, i can draw what you mean to say. but perhaps spare some of the other readers and explain in this poem why you're so numb.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Your great at making rhymes flow so well. I liked the poem and it has a sad message.

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Thank you..

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

ohhhhhh beautiful but sad :(

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Thanks.. Yeah..

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

welcome , in Arabic عفوا :)

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:)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

:)