Lost & Lonely

A girl who is lost and lonely hence the title. She is finding herself, but in the mean time she's hurting and feels sadness most of the time.

Sometimes I just feel down,

And I feel myself frown.

The reason for this,

Could be the things and people in my life I miss.

 

The overwhelming feeling that I need to cry,

But I have no idea why.

I often feel really lonely,

And there's no one here to hold me.

 

Lately I've felt drained,

Probably due to all the weight I've gained.

I just want to be happy,

Then I'll feel less crappy.

 

Maybe I'm not worth much,

Maybe I don't deserve any love.

I spend most of my time in bed sleeping,

And with that I am weeping.

 

I know life isn't a bunch of roses,

I just want to breathe before my heart closes.

I'm now used to all this hurt,

To feeling nothing I can convert.

 

Inside I just feel so bitter,

And at the moment i'm a quitter.

My feet are still finding the ground,

Until then I'm not going to make a sound.

Author's Note

Let me know what you think thanks :)

Reviews

[SpokenWord]

It is close to depression this person is experiencing and it is hard to turn the other leaf to get a fresh start. Losing someone is never easy but if one can focus on the good times, like the time you first met instead of on the last time one spoke it can make it a little easier especially to smile. I like this poem it rhymed all the way through which gave it a beat of happiness to it.

[Dove]

A very emotional and deep piece of writing. Seems depressing and it had a great flow.

[Kiri Nells]

Deep and emotional. Though provoking and well written. Great write!

[Hannah]

Impressive poem with a nice flow. I love all the words you use. This poem is very emotional and means a lot. This is one of my favorites that you have wrote.

[P.S I Love You]

Such depression.. I love the deepness in this poem.. So true, I understand you.. Really a great write..

[Rose Masen]

"I know life isn't a bunch of roses,

I just want to breathe before my heart closes."

One of the most amazing lines I've ever read. This is one of favorite poems- hands down. Lovely job!

[Katub]

My goodness, this is a really emotional peace of work. It's well wrote and I can relate to how you feeling, there's good rhyme and your one of my most read writers :) well done :P

[Shardbearer99]

I always enjoy reading a really emotional piece of poetry. It allows readers to know, or at least understand how the writer is feeling deep inside. It's close to the heart. It really gave a good light on how you feel; deep, rich, and intimate. Loved it

[iamkim]

Ohhh... can I keep you a company? This is truly magnificent! It portrays how much a person feels when we miss someone and there's no one to hold on to.

Great write!

[Zoe Jay]

This is a good emotional poem, it's honest and intimate. I like the rhyme scheme, it's disciplined and well executed, but my feeling is that's it's not the right kind of rhyme scheme for a poem as emotional and intense as this. I felt the rhymes were a bit overwhelming and got in the way of your expression of the content, and also, strong rhyme schemes like this have a tendency to give a poem a slightly lighter and more whimsical feel which I didn't think suited this. However, it does have a chunky, solid feel, the structure is sound and well done, and the directness, simplicity and honesty are affecting. Nice write.