Introduction

The weights on my eyes are feeling heavier and heavier. I'm not going to fall asleep, I tell myself time and time again. I can’t fall asleep; God only knows how I will die in my dreams tonight.

My eyes are closing, falling into the spell. The darkness is taking over my sight, but I fight back. No matter how much I try to stay awake, my body isn’t agreeing.

Reviews

[MichelleClay]

You got my attention with this opening. On to the next :D

[Cara Rosalie]

Great intro. You are pithy, which works great to hook the reader. I am quite compelled to read on and will do so now. :)

[Jim Parson]

Ooooo...is this a new Nightmare on Elm Street? Okay, you hooked me...reading on!