Very strong piece and Point made in only a few words. I do Love how you brought this full circle. Through out life everything eventually comes back to you, the important things you look back and see you have come full circle. To know these acts from different perspectives. We start and end with Love. Fine poetry thank you for sharing. God Bless
Sheer Terror
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thank you so much :3
6 Years Ago
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powerful poem....such a great closing ... how we do forget that there is love in just about all of us..it takes a very dark soul to put that little light out ..well done...going to try and take your poem with me throughout the day today ... peace and joy!
E.
As I've said before, haikus are not really my thing, but you do have a way with them. This is a touching message encapsulated concisely in very few words, which as i understand it is the entire point of haiku. Very well done.