More Than Me

We're getting farther
From anywhere that we want to be
And I'm coming closer
To being something more than me

Another heart is broken
Into so many delicate shards
Too many words are never spoken
And you can't even play the trump card

I see you sitting there
Sad as the sky is blue
And it's so unfair
Because I would only help you

Don't worry
Be brave
It's still early
You can still be saved

Just open those eyes
And your heart
I promise clear skies
When you're no longer apart

Reviews

[Bay bay]

hahaha you're the one that makes people said because you lie and sneak around behind people's backs with your ugly witch nosed ex. emofaggot.com

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

A beautiful hopeful write in the end, the narrator is a true knight in shining armor as some may say. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[Star-Runner]

A sad and heartfelt write, written well.

[Kelly D. Burris]

Wow Travis, this is an impacting piece for me. I see where you want to help and be there so much for another person, but they don't want or can't see it's there for themselves. I they could only hope even a little the way their life would change. Speaks of someone I know. I'm still waiting for them to be saved, even if I am not there to see it.
Wonderful piece.
Kelly