You

I couldn't let the sorrow enter my life again.


I didn't want the harsh life that would follow rejection.


It was too late


When I decided to tell you.


You had taken a gun


and shot yourself in the head.


My beautiful angel was gone


And was to never come back.


You were gone forever


But you would


Always be a part of me.


You are the other half to my heart.


You are mine


And I am yours.

Author's Note

Well I hope you guys enjoy it. I have been told its quite boring so feel free to say what you think! No hard feeling eh? :)

Reviews

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Kelly,

Why would someone tell you it's boring? Again an easy solution is an Ice pick in the throat as I told someone earlier. That always shuts up my critics. I enjoyed it. I do like when others share suffering...

You will be getting an email from me soon.

Sorry, I do that at times. Just a quickie inspirational moment...Like flashes of light and scenerios. I enjoyed this... I think it's far from boring and really do suggest an ice pick to the throat of whoever told you otherwise.

Always

Matthew

[SimonitroX]

Interesting poem there! Is the "you" guy someone you know in real life that at some point committed suicide? Anything that has a message or an intention of suicide is kinda eerie! Anyway, interesting read to say the least.