True Freedom

True Freedom

A Poem by Lola
"

You cut me off beating me down with false accusations. You changed, not me. God sent angels rebelled demonic ravens that teavh me with their betrayal what true freedom is.

"
It takes losing all you have
To know what true freedom is

You were everything I had
Manifested into two angels
Imperfect
Relevant
Lovely

Sent from the heavens
Just for me
Prayed the Lord for
All he has given me in such
Beautiful beings

The skies sang my
Smiles and laughters

But then one morning
The bluejays came out to play
And the skies started to say
"Fly away, don't stay. Something terrible is coming your way."

It chanted until dusk
My innocence
Still confused

Until two ravens
Flew my way
Scratching my apperance
Stabbing my back
Their vicious beaks
Feasting on my insides

Flew away
They did
And i was left on the floor
Reflecting the dark sky
That started to sing my
Frowns and tears

I start to stand tall
But my back is always greater
With a shoulder to lie on
I looked around
Found the ravens twitching for life
Looked at myself
Crystal clear
Not a bruise in sight

Am I the monster
That made them not tolerate
My existence anymore?
I hate that the weight of me
Is left on everything I own

I accepted their flaws
But they never accepted mine
All their accusations are false
I'm not what they think I am
They are what they describe me to be
I never changed
I grew up
I grew stronger

The angels that turned into malicious ravens
The ravens that thought they could kill me off and beat me down
Now that they're gone
My skies sing a much better song

And truly, i declare:
It takes losing all you have
To know what true freedom is.

© 2014 Lola


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This takes pace...as you read the lines...
you envelop the entirety of the reasoning...
in the end with those last passages ---

And truly, i declare:
It takes losing all you have
To know what true freedom is.

as you did in the beginning of this verse...
the clarification is sealed at that juncture...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow, I'm lost for words.

Kaze~

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This takes pace...as you read the lines...
you envelop the entirety of the reasoning...
in the end with those last passages ---

And truly, i declare:
It takes losing all you have
To know what true freedom is.

as you did in the beginning of this verse...
the clarification is sealed at that juncture...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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