Paper

Paper

A Chapter by Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

Upon the vague pool of white
Her body I have found
Sailing softly in her flight
Sleeping safe and sound

I've called it words,
This space between my fingers
Whilst traced with yours
Compose a sentence where they linger

Watched each period . pause her breath
And comma , slow the gasps
As there my hands explore with death
Your body of paragraphs

Call it passion this we hold
And watch just how she bloom
A body inked in black and bold
Placing love within the womb
To title her... Beloved


© 2018 Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)


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Interesting for you to write about passion of all people since you have passion for everyone you see and now apparently everything

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

3 Years Ago

Passion for no one. Only the empty she'll I once believed be real
Wonderful use of words and thoughts. Each paragraph strong and worthwhile. This is amazing use of words. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding chapter.,
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


What is meta writing? I have no idea ...

I like the softness you conjure here. It’s really rather clever what you have done. Although I am not sure writing is like making love with the paper ... um, well no. Paper is no substitute for the real thing ;) The passion I get.

It’s like a lullaby and love song mixed together. Nice one X

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

3 Years Ago

I know exactly what you mean. Yes, paper is nothing compared to the body of a lover. Oh Missy what h.. read more
Such a fine example of meta-writing!You've managed to perfectly portray the erotic relationship between the writer and their writings!Nice work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

3 Years Ago

A difficult task it was, but I always love to face a challenge. I appreciate you taking the time for.. read more
Ms Paragon

3 Years Ago

My pleasure!
Amazing. I thoroughly enjoyed the intricacies in this poem. This was so creative and imaginative. "Call it passion this we hold..." was one of my favorite. Then again, I enjoyed the whole thing. Great read.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

3 Years Ago

Thanks k you kindly for taking the time to read this
"body of paragraphs" that's a lovely metaphor. Only you could write about writing in such a sensual way, Sire. I guess my favourite are the last lines. Beautiful piece 😊

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

3 Years Ago

I always wish to write about things unthinkable, so why not write about writing? It's a stretch I kn.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Of course, what's the good in it without a challenge ;)
I hope they're well appreciated then.. read more
Writing is a little like making love to the paper with our words and sometimes it's making love through our words. Whichever it is, it is always satisfying to see the outcome and appreciate it. There is a lovely and sensual flow to your words. Fitting for a piece titled Beloved.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

3 Years Ago

You never cease to leave wonderful words. Thank you Papaya. Who would have thought that a piece of p.. read more
Ana Papaya

3 Years Ago

A blank page can be filled with so much.
You're welcome. :)

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Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse (Y.A.D.)

Worcester, MA



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My writing is strongly based on science, culture, myths and fantasy. I do enjoy poem writing but short stories are my passion, I am developing a few novels as well. I am looking for any critique that .. more..

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