Endless Beginnings

Feeling optimistic after quite a while.

Reviews

[Ken e Bujold]

this is a very good poem Yumna. The structure is well formed, crisp clean line breaks that lead from one image to the next like steps to a temple. The sentiment expressed is genuine, without slipping into the sweet cloying trap of sentimentality. The first and last lines are a complete thought, poem within the poem itself that give your reader plenty of room to wiggle and swim around in while they ponder the entire piece. The image of sleepless nights, also suggests so many possible avenues, good times and hardships, in essence the very stuff of living a life shared with another.
Ken e

[Lisasview]

First read of yours and I did enjoy your words..short but connected to express so much.
I find it strange that you have 254 viewed only 19 reviews... everyone should take the time to review after reading..
Lisa, now in Spain

[Chris Shaw]

Wonderful brevity Dr Y. There is so much positivity in this piece. Good to see you. It's been a while.

Chris

[V]

I love this romantic and positive, little write.

[Ken Simm.]

That is a motto I can subscribe to.

[KAREN]

Hopes and dreams should never be given up! I like this quote, it's thaught provocking!

[Davidgeo]

Smells like math.... and sex.

I like your word economy. Most people would ruin this with superfluous bullshit.

[Jibey]

Hopes and dreams...Yes. Do not give up, fear Yumna.

[Giulia King]

I love this! And I miss you

[Kelly Scheppers]

Shakespeare said, and I quote..."brevity is the soul of wit." What a beautiful offering, Yumna!