Lovebird

Doctor and patient


Are two wings of a lovebird


Crippled bird can't fly

Reviews

[Sarah Khalil]

Oh, this is wonderfully layered :) I have never thought of the balance between a doctor and patient in terms of the balance you presented it, a thoughtfulness a level higher up than people would normally draw the comparison. Smartly done, thanks for sharing! :)

[zainul]

I feel very blessed and honored and by your thoughtful review,Sarah Khalil.:)
Thanks for stopping by.

[Sami Khalil]

An awesome poem. I like your analogies here Zainul and how you compare lovebirds to a doctor and a patient where both need each other and depend on each other to fly and soar. You are right for crippled birds can't fly without healing or freedom first. Bravo

[zainul]

Thank you Dear Sami for interpreting the relationship in such a nice way.:)
I hope many friends will relate the situation.

[Sami Khalil]

I hope so too... You write deep stuff and great ones...:)

[zainul]

Thanks for the compliments.:)
I am very blessed to have friends like you.

[Sami Khalil]

The feelings are mutual...:)

[zainul]

You are very correct.
Thanks a lot.:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)
It is not complete without the emoticon...:)

[zainul]

I was expecting the dessert and silently waited to have the gift.
Then left home for some time.
At last got the lovely gift.
Thank you dear friend.
You you have correctly said that It is not complete without the emoticon...:)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...You are welcome...:)

[zainul]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

☺☺☺♪♪♪

[zainul]

Awesome!

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...:)

[zainul]

Hahaha...:)

[Frieda P]

Lovebirds seems an odd choice but I understand concept of where you're going with this one....

[zainul]

I appreciate your nice comment.
Thanks for stopping by.

[Frieda P]

You're welcome zainul, seems a need to get a new doctor :-)

[zainul]

I shiver at the memory of a celebrated doctor who was engaged in romance!

[Frieda P]

That's where my mind went originally....

[zainul]

I know you are very intelligent :-)

[Frieda P]

Lol not really, just from joisey, more street smart. ;-)

[zainul]

Ha HA Ha.
I am happy with this much of your intellect..;-)

[Frieda P]

;-)

[zainul]

;-)

[Stella Armour]

not to be allowed their freedom is crippling Zainul... a clever senryu..

[zainul]

Thanks for the admiring review,dear Stella.:)

[Stella Armour]

you are welcome my friend..

[zainul]

:)

[Holly Mason]

very nice ...
like your thoughts
thank you for sharing

[zainul]

Thanks for stopping by to grace this piece.:)

[Prritiy]

wow what a comparison, liked it :)

[zainul]

Thanks lot,dear friend.:)

[Prritiy]

you are always welcome :)

[zainul]

:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[s y e]

Lovely comparison!
Again, I loved it!

[zainul]

Thank you dear friend.
I am sorry, I missed your amazing contribution.

[Sneakygnome]

Thanks for sharing haiku.

Random aside: I'm always amazed how much more content can be fit into English haiku than in Japanese. For example, lovebird -- ボタンインコ (botan-inko) -- counts as 6 mora!

[zainul]

Thanks for the great review and amazing contribution.
I have to learn more on Haiku bit by bit.
Your help will be necessary for my pursuit.
Thanks again.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Sorry, I do not understand ...

Jazz X

[sienikeha]

lovely. : )

[zainul]

Thanks for the nice review.