Happy Birthday

Wish very Happy Birthday to all on their birthdays

Wish you very Happy Birthday
Let this smile remain for ever
Live in joy which I always pray
Let there always be divine favor

Reviews

[quinfinn]

lovely little birthday wish and happy birthday to all of those immediately affected by this date.

[zainul]

Thank you for stopping by to cheer me up with your lovely wish that has affected me now.Today is my birthday!

[quinfinn]

have a happy one!

[zainul]

Thanks for the lovely gesture.
This is a great pleasure for me.

[quinfinn]

you are 58.....one and a half months younger than myself....still very young

[zainul]

Thank you dear senior friend.
I have my respect and honor for you as my senior.

[Jess]

Thank you very much Grandad:')
I really appreciate it..

[zainul]

You are too nice to appreciate this piece.
What is your DOB?

[Jess]

Pardon Grandad??what is it?

[zainul]

DOB is Date of Birth.

[Jess]

Ahm,hi Grandad:')sorry for the late reply..today is my 17th birthday,,february 07

[zainul]

But,it is my pleasure to inform you that today is 06 February and it is my birthday.

[Jess]

Oh sorry Grandad,,tomorrow will be my birthday..lol.I almost forgot..,
Really Grandad??today is your birthday??

[zainul]

You are appreciated for saying sorry.
Really,today is my birthday.

[Jess]

HAPPY BIRTHDAY Grandafd!!!!wishing you many many more birthdays to come,,,How old are you Grandad?

[zainul]

Thanks for the wishes on my birthday.
My DOB is 06-02-1954.
Please calculate my age.

[Jess]

ah,now I know Grandad,hehe

[zainul]

Thank you dear granddaughter,hehe

[Jess]

You're always welcome Grandad;')

[zainul]

Thanks a lot

[Jess]

What are you doing Grandad?
What time is it in your country today?

[zainul]

Just writing poems and taking care of Khicks,my awesome granddaughter.
It is 11.01 am now.
read moreJust writing poems and taking care of Khicks,my awesome granddaughter.
It is 11.01 am now.
What time is it at your place?

[s y e]

Lovely! Very sweet and kind.

[Ban Heo]

I'm not sure about how I feel about the echoed "always" in this poem. I feel like something this condensed either has to go all out or leave no room for repetition

[zainul]

Your suggestion taken very cordially.
I will try to fix it soon.
Thanks for your admiring review and amazing contribution.

[ms. barrie]

lots of clarity in this poem as it shows light that radiates from your heart. very sweet, lovely poem, unique choice of words. i agree: the last line is my favorite. i also wish you the same, not only on your birthday, but year round. Namaste :)

[zainul]

Thank you Barrie for the wonderful review and wishes.
Wish you a very Happy Birthday for your next birthday in advance.

[ms. barrie]

thank you, zaniul! may your heart be filled with smiles and your nights be filled with inspiration

[zainul]

You are welcome,lovely poetess.
I wish the same for you.

[ms. barrie]

aw, thank you, Dear Poet :)

[zainul]

I feel very honored.
Thanks for the favor :)

[Tate Morgan]

Divine favor Oh I would like to bestow that on a few friends Thank you

[zainul]

I feel very blessed to learn your lovely gesture.
Let me also allow me to wish you with this humble piece for your next birthday.
Wish you a very Happy Birthday for your next birthday in advance.

[Tate Morgan]

Thank you and the same to you.

[zainul]

You are most welcome.
Thanks for your wishes for my birthday.

[Tate Morgan]

of course thanks

[Mic]

Wonderful wishes, and may they all come back to you tenfold.

[zainul]

This is really really wonderful wish for me Mic.
Let petals of flowers be sprinkled on you from heaven.
Let me also pronounce my wishes for your next birthday.
Wish you a very Happy Birthday for your next birthday in advance.

[rnuff]

This is a lovey write

[zainul]

Thanks for the very inspiring review.
Wish you a very Happy Birthday for your next birthday in advance.

[jkhatz]

This is so lovely! I would feel honored to receive such a birthday wish!

[zainul]

I also feel very honored to send a birthday wish for your next birthday.
Wish you a very Happy Birthday in advance.

[jkhatz]

Thank you. My birthday just passed. Oct 1.

[zainul]

Sorry for missing the great event.
Please allow me to wish you for the belated event.
Wish you a very Happy Birthday that came on October 1 this year and will be coming again and again in the future.
Cheers!

[Marie]

Lovely. Thank you. I am having a birthday on the 2lst of this month, so your poem is very uch appreciated.

[zainul]

Thank you Marie for accepting the wish cordially.
I feel very to be able to greet you just before your birthday.
Wish you a very Happy Birthday in advance.