The Rose

The Rose

A Poem by zainul
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An angel may be too near of an amorous person. But she may be far away for him to approach her.

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A morning bird beckoned me here,
To meet  my angel longing to share.
I felt too shy to gaze at her face,
What charm is there,I can't trace.

I saw the soft lips with very light hue,

What magic is hidden there,nobody knew.
I craved to touch the wonderful lips,
The bird stopped me to offer some tips.

I stared deep into the skies of the eyes,

I saw there rainbows playing with butterflies.
I craved to move my fingers over the gems,
The bird stopped me to offer  other games.

I looked at the thin pink-colored ear.

It was so lovely with the simple gear!
I stooped to see the type of the pierce,
The bird stopped me,it looked fierce!

I switched my vision to the  golden fleece,

That covered the head of my lovely bliss.
I moved to examine the sparkle of the hair,
The bird stopped me saying  it would not be fair.

With broken heart, I looked at her nose,

I saw with pleasure, it bloomed like a rose!
I opted to get closer  and take some smell,
The bird happily sang and wagged its tail.

© 2012 zainul


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this is very dearful natural poetry, I like willium Wordsworth poetry of nature, and this was like one of them. Not for comparison it is truly. Very imaginative and we can see your deep eyes on nature.
I stared deep into the skies of the eyes,
I saw there rainbows playing with butterflies.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

7 Years Ago

I feel very honored and inspired by your admiring review.
Thank you dear poet for stopping by .. read more
Saddam

7 Years Ago

absolutely my pleasure dear poet.



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this is very dearful natural poetry, I like willium Wordsworth poetry of nature, and this was like one of them. Not for comparison it is truly. Very imaginative and we can see your deep eyes on nature.
I stared deep into the skies of the eyes,
I saw there rainbows playing with butterflies.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

7 Years Ago

I feel very honored and inspired by your admiring review.
Thank you dear poet for stopping by .. read more
Saddam

7 Years Ago

absolutely my pleasure dear poet.
Very nice poem and great use of rhyme scheme. Lovely indeed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by to grace this piece.
aha such a lovely poem of love, the lady is really lucky to have so creative and loving companion.

liked it a lot :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

This is a wonderful partnership.
Both of us enjoy the warmth of good gestures.
Prritiy

8 Years Ago

:)
Prritiy

8 Years Ago

:)
A very light touching piece. Its charm gave me a small lift this morning.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

Thank you Smith for stopping by to grace this piece with your admiring review.
This means a wo.. read more
Its a very unique poem. I really like the choice of words to describe each detail and the vision you have given to the reader. Its truly amazing. For a writer like me who has so much yet to grasp in poetry, you come as an inspiration. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

Hi Zoya,
It is my pleasure that you have reviewed this piece so positively.
While writin.. read more
Wow. This was beautiful.
Going into my favourites! Wonderful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

8 Years Ago

Hello Sye,
How do you do.
I am sorry that I am very late in responding to your lovely co.. read more
There is a playfulness in your word choice that makes the reader smile. I was glad that your Rose felt and is different than the common ones.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

9 Years Ago

I am very happy for your admiring review.
I appreciate you for your kind compliments.
beautiful! seems you notice every little detail of your Rose...even so seems somehow funny nd like word games in a good way...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

9 Years Ago

Thank you Nina for the attentive reading of the poem and inspiring review.
The flow is smooth amd their is stunning details in this piece

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the inspiring review.
This one made it into my favorites! Just lovely, absolutely lovely!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

9 Years Ago

Thank you ,Allie.It is my pleasure that you have made the poem your favorite.
I thank you fo.. read more

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Dhaka, Bangladesh



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