22nd century love song

22nd century love song

A Poem by Zatoichi

 

 

The low thrum of the computer keeps me company-

It is the sound of my electric blood as my soul is poured into a silicon mold

of amazing durability. I’m getting old,

but spun with fibers the tensile strength of spiders on LSD;

I know my way around the circuitry

pulsing thru your motherboard and into your

PC.

© 2010 Zatoichi


Author's Note

Zatoichi
I was excoriated on another forum for posting the last line as "pea sea". I think it was a wierd turn of phrase, and I like wierd. What do you think?

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I love poems where you cant even tell they rhyme until you go back for a second look to see what exactly you should compliment the author on.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hell yeah.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hehehe... I liked it, I was getting curious on how will the message be imparted. I actually liked it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zatoichi

6 Years Ago

So how does one go about acquiring invisibility?
Zatoichi

2 Years Ago

Still wondering/ always wandering

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Added on April 7, 2008
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Zatoichi
Zatoichi

Laguna Niguel, CA



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