Love IS A Beautiful Thing

Love IS A Beautiful Thing

A Poem by zee
"

love is real and yours to find look for it but don't be blind

"
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What is love? Pierces my thoughts like a chime

I've pondered this question many a time

Is love the enduring agony of verbal assaults

Hitting you over and over increasing your faults?

Is love the gentle caress of of a word spoken tenderly

Sweet sounds such as love and honey, called cutely?

Is love the trapping pain of a physical wound

Believing you to feel useless and withered as a prune?

Is love the soft touch of summer's ripe peaches

Warming your soul like the waves of tropical beaches?

What is love? 

Something to be in awe of

A feeling to hold on to

An emotion that goes through you

Love is a beautiful thing

Love makes you want to laugh, dance and sing

Love is something everyone should feel

And if it feels amazing then you know it's real 

© 2008 zee


Author's Note

zee
This was a thought that formed into my mind this morning, though it took a while to come into writing. For some reason it was hard for me to get this out. Maybe because I'm not actually in love or feeling loved by a special someone...



Reviews

This is great, but I really think that you should have put it in prose instead of verse. Maybe you would like to turn it into a spoken-word :D! Than it would be better.

A.M.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 15 Years Ago



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zee
zee

Monte rio, CA



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I'm multifaceted and also multidimensional. My body doesn't define me. I'm a little bit of this and a whole lot of that. A free spirit, nonconforming mama of four, and hard to fit into a box. A goo.. more..

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