I Found my Courage in the Bottle
Reviewed by armin
3 Minutes Ago
Oh my, only 12 lines and I completely had an amazing feeling reading it. Liked it , you found your courage locked in a bottle and you just ran away to experience freedom. And a good realisation at the.. more..
Reviewed by Rene Salinas
5 Hours Ago
So many different feelings , so many different stages, great to see the passion, the searching the what may come ... I of course related to the first one without any hesitation and combined with the s.. more..
Reviewed by Bee C.
1 Hour Ago
Superbly written. The pace of this gives the reader a fleeting glimpse into the workings of a frantic mind. Such an interesting topic, and I think you pulled it off really well. I especially love the .. more..
All Of You
Reviewed by Rana
3 Hours Ago
This is so different, so lovely and sweet. Few changes u could make: stanza 2 line 3 "look at my eyes" should be "look 'into' my eyes"; stanza 4 line 2 "the way i killed my soul with the way that can'.. more..