A shattered voice gives life to a thousand more … This brave, brave woman opens so many doorways. Her death was so public but had it been any other way would the world have as good an understanding of.. [more]

A rather curious poem, perhaps? Almost surreal, in certain respects? With so few words, you have included some thought-provoking imagery. In this piece, love is portrayed as a welcome distraction to t.. [more]

 
Sometimes she just didn't have the all the facts.
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The fact that he would not elaborate on it was good enough for his own chldren to know when to stop as.. [more]

Interesting, the way you write of Mr. Blue Eyes. Your poem leaves out a lot, making the subject vague, but it seems to fit really well with the way he was vague himself when he disappeared. The reader.. [more]

This is less a poem and more a masterpiece of word-play - surrealism wrapped in wit and weep.

'I am alone and full of nothing more to say' - if ever there were empty, false words, thos.. [more]

Very interesting. The feeling of questioning and doubt was something that I could really relate to.
I liked the rhyming, as it added to the flow of each of the lines.
At the end, I did .. [more]

I have not heard the word, "nullipara", before. Anyway, this was a very concise but meaningful poem. "What will it be when the birds have flown?" However, I was unsure if that line, was a reference to.. [more]

This was intensely beautiful in the most damaged way! Grammatically, there are no flaws that I could spot, I was just so enthralled in the story, in the drama. So cleverly constructed, so well written.. [more]

Write nine more tales of this caliber, Mister, and Chaucer will have met his match!
A mighty, and a frightening Traveller's Tale, to be sure! The way you anthropomorphosed the negative emotions.. [more]

I loved this story.
And it made me cry.
Your characters were very believable and real, and the plot twist was excellent.
The first sentence of Liv's letter; "I'm sorry to leave yo.. [more]