Black Widow for sure if this was number three. And the fact that she sang with the devil on her tongue as she died show where her loyalty lay. He now allows her to walk the streets of the dead to ha.. more..

You've written many stand out pieces Jacob but this one reached out to me. It fell together
nicely, the craftsmanship, outstanding. The concept even better. Really impressed with how
you m.. more..

I remember this series from the last time I was on the cafe. Overall, this piece is probably the most striking and powerful of the ones I have read. It is raw and gripping. Its honest and it doesn't p.. more..

Interesting use of vocabulary and rhyme.

Its shadow darkening my very thoughts keeping hope away
Looking, waiting, hoping, praying to prey upon me today
It smelled stink of th.. more..

I remember leaving the house after breakfast and coming home for dinner. Summer was a magical time. I was 12 in 1983. No cell phones, no computers, no cable TV! We played, grew deep friendships a.. more..