It's interesting the different emotions I had while reading this; intially I was having fond memories of my own childhood, but then I had a twinge of fear. I'm 20, so I guess you can consider me still.. [more]

Really reads through well - very compact and yet not at the expense of good solid words for us logophiles. This one has a particularly good meter/rhythm, too. It also raises a great philosophical que.. [more]

LOL* Cat on Valium--no wonder she didn't make it to the litter box :( I really appreciated that you didn't go into too much detail about that, what I was imagining was bad enough!!

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This is a nicely done piece... gets across the idea of the sacrifice made for another. It has a strong rhyming structure that generally flows and keeps the poem moving forward, but the are a few diff.. [more]

That was amazing. Sort of "living in the moment" and at the same time, as one searches for love, or was it, love found? Yet since you're feeling all the wondrous emotions of bliss, you can't help feel.. [more]

nice job, it is not exactly my style of poetry but it is still well written nonetheless. Your words really do reflect on how humanity lives today and how life isn't fair. Perhaps you should write a se.. [more]

WOW! Intense! I loved this poem and your emotions are so clear! I love the title too...don't know why but definitly caught my attention. I really like how you tell him you still have feelings for .. [more]

Woah, this was crazy! Bit in a totally good way! Initially, I get the impression you're describing a schizophrenic with serious mental problems, but then I realized..I can totally relate! Does this m.. [more]

Hey now this is a break from your ordinary style.. but I actually really liked it! With an erotic twist it flows really evenly full of yearning for a night of passion.. and if like you mentioned.. you.. [more]

Oh man... its very sad and beautiful! I dont even know what to say. Being haunted by a loved one and the pain the ghost makes u suffer just strolling around.. I know that.

I have a poe.. [more]