Unearthing Life 1

As you protrude your heart
in search of  affection , harmony
and  refuge ;
People  may often reject you once,
may be twice,
eventually thrice too.

But as you grow visibly "big",
meaningfully in some way,
the same group of people would very much
 love to be with you .
All on a sudden you become such a  pleasant company
for too many people,
that you feel like giving yourself pinches ,
time and again.

Reviews

[ms. barrie]

Very profound, enlightening, poem, Anand.
As hard as it is to try to practice...one should
Heed to their soul (intuition) rather than just their heart's wishes.
Your poem, well structured, speaks volumes of how
Trust should be earned, and the consequences of
The lesson you have to learn...if one keeps ignoring
Their inner voice eloquently.

Thank you for sharing! :))

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much dear. Love you :) you are always very kind and lavish in your praise :)

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome, Anand...'twas a pleasure to read.
I'm kind to those...who are kind

[ms. barrie]

:3 Namaste!!!!!!!! :))))))

[Frontier]

This sure does seem like a way to unearth life, to grow big meaningfully, that last word is what many people forget. Valuable message.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much for the kind review :)

[MsJewel]

It is difficult to understand what makes us connect with another and form a friendship....or how two people so different can become close. I found your poem to be both insightful and inspirational. Brilliant writing my sweet friend.

:) Julie

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much Julie. I am honored.

much love back :) :)
how are you doing these days?

[MsJewel]

I'm doing great sweetie. How are you?

[Luna Lucretia Lawson]

This is a very good read, and makes you think, i like it

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much my friend :)

[Jasmine W]

This is excellent!

Well done.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks for the kind comment my friend :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

One must keep digging until answers come forth, well done, good read.

[Anand Sehgal]

Thank you so very much again, my friend :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

your very welcome.

[TPK Stories]

It's hard when others expect a lot from you and you find out who you can trust...great write...

[Anand Sehgal]

choice of people in life is very much important :)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

So strange, I thought I commented on this one already..lol I know I have read it multiple times, wonderful perceptive piece on the capricious nature of befriending... tend to have to be picky these days of those who look only to know you for their benefit. Attempting to make fake bonds... thought provoking.. well done :)

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much dear :) I am honored :)

[Pryde Foltz]

But as you grow visibly "big",
meaningfully in some way,
the same group of people would very much
love to be with you .
All on a sudden you become such a pleasant company
for too many people,
that you feel like giving yourself pinches ,
time and again.

A thinker this one is. To have people to love for you is to have people to love.

[Anand Sehgal]

Glad that you felt connected to it. thanks so very much dear Pryde :) :)

[icelandicblue]

We are formed by our hardships and difficulties but we do learn from them and if we are very lucky we find light where darkness once reigned. It's a very inspirational poem.

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much my dear friend for the kind review :)