India Diary 1

Suddenly came from nowhere ,
the pitch dark clouds.
It had gestated the
"much awaited rains" for long.
For me ,
Waited a feel-good journey by a local train in India,
The unique thirst-quenching scent of soil
after the rain-drops hit the ground ,
The pleasant moist breeze....
The awesomeness never ceases
in my hometown, in my own world -
The very much known world.

Reviews

[Green]

I've always loved the rain, but it does have an extra soothing effect when I'm at home. Anywhere else and it just seems like rain, but at home it feels special. Reading this made me consider the idea that many English professors see hanging out in the rain as a sort of baptism (I had to do a lot of analytical novel reading this past year, so I'm up on it :) ). Knowing that just made this resonate with me more. It's like coming home sort of makes you better and fixes all the bad things. Good write.

[Anand Sehgal]

I am so happy to know that the write had an impact on you :) thanks so much dear :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Rain is such a cleansing thing.Seems sometimes to be washing away the bad and ushering in a new day .Excellent poetry Anand as always :)

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much Vidya . Wass up?

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hey you I am very good.Wass up with you my sweet friend?

[Anand Sehgal]

having good time in India.....enjoying my summer vacation :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh that sounds lovely Anand.Well don't party too hard ya hear lol

[Anand Sehgal]

:) :) :P :P

[Glass Heart Inc]

Very nice poem describing the relief rain can bring :)

[Anand Sehgal]

thanks so very much dear friend, for the kind review :)