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Reviews

[Ken Collins]

Wow, this is such a radical example of it's own structure! You used words in a way I have never before seen/read. A message is in there, like all art, but you made the words art in itself by how you arranged them. The form reminds me of an eye test... but it really is a reality check for our brains because us silly humans are always freaking out about every little thing that goes wrong in day to day life. Nice work. Very different!

[Crystal L. Test]

This was a very structurally inventive poem. I would've never thought of it. This is why I love reading other people's work so much. It makes me realize we all work in different ways.

Great job.

[Stacy A. Foster]

Very creative and different! Absolutely Eye-catching.
This was fun to read and visually enticing! :)

[Taja B.]

This poem is very different and it has a very unique layout and format-it definitely gets your point across. Plus, I like how it's so ironic when you say "nothing is a mistake" and then all of a sudden, you turn it upside down, showing that a mistake does leave a huge effect. I was really taken by suprise!

Well anyways, I really enjoyed this poem and it's extremely different, but it's a great poem in general.

Nice job.:)

[Christina D. Rodriguez]

Whoa, I didn't expect it to turn upside down. I've never seen someone do something like this before. Definitely gave me a mental jolt. Excellent.

[Where the night sky and..]

Besides it being eye catching its also mind catching. ^_^ i enjoyed it , something new to me.

[Luna Tique Fringe]

I love experimental, off center, avante guard art..that's what this is...poetry presented as visual art. Yeah!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Uniqur write , Carol..

[The Spaniard]

I like this one a lot. The reflection of your words brings it to life. I look foward to reading more from you.

[Brian Osterhouse]

All that is, is meant to be. Otherwise it wouldn't. Your visuals really push your point home.

[Lynn Mariposa]

Visually and lyrically stunning.

Was fun to read going backwards too :)