Don't say nothing

I love Paloma.

   


                                   Don't say nothing


             

       Just be

You and I.
We have known the storms of living and we have been the flowing rivers of love and kindness.
We had many good days and we have known a few bad days.
You and I.
Now we  had found place where we don't need words.
We have found our place.
I know you and you know me.
I bring you simple gifts to make you smile
and you massage my tire body when needed.
Your kind face.
Is my daily miracle and I pray to the kind gods.
You and I.
Forever and a day.
I love you my dear lover

                          John Castellenas/Coyote

Author's Note

Just words.

Reviews

[Indigomoon]

This is very beautiful simply to pit it the showing of one another's love for each other is just beautiful. This shows how a couple who's stood the test of time how even years when your body is weak and tired that you take comfort in each other and love each other as much as the first day.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[PandaPeaceful]

Once again, your words bring such impact to my mind. Your poem is simple yet, speaks with such meaning. Gorgeous job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[PandaPeaceful]

Truly no problem. Your writing contains pure magic.

[Norbanus]

Super poem, Coyote. It's one of those that we all wish we had written.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Norbanus. I appreciate the kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

Sounded like a beautiful song of the heart and a melody to the ears. Much enjoyed.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sami for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome.

[Silmara McGarry]

Not just words...Wonderful words...One can only hope for such beautiful *You and I*.

Uplifting and so romantic...Lovely song to go with it!
Well done!!! :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Silmara. I appreciate the comment.

[Neville]

Saying nothing whatsoever when in the company of a special person, or indeed, a lover can speak volumes and you have captured the very essence of such precious and quiet moments here. Another great write John, write on.........Neville

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Neville. For my wife of 23 years. Most of us don't appreciate the kind people near.

[Neville]

Very true John, very true indeed. Oh' my wife and I have just celebrated our 36th anniversary together. You can beat an egg but you can't beat a good woman......Neville

[Sean M. Addams]

a very beautiful piece.. overall I thought you did an amazing job on these words.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Poetic License]

This read like the perfect, cozy sweater. Every lover's goal, and you captured It perfectly

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Jon Roggie]

Finding this feeling is precious. Words seem to match the feeling

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Jon for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.

[Priest]

I am filled with happiness when I discover others have made it. A moment that I hope last forever. I have had moments like this and indulged when it was presented to me. My moments don't stay but one day they will! Forever hopeful!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. I do appreciate.