And We Kissed

And We Kissed

A Poem by Chellie
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My soul came alive with the touch of your lips

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We sat in your car

Small talk had vanished

Into a desire filled silence

In which we didn't know how to fill the void

I stared into your eyes

My heart pounding in my chest

Beating for your touch

Wanting to kiss your lips

You stared back at me

Breath heavy in your lungs

As your eyes close

And you moved your head to mine


And we kissed

So passionately my body melted in your arms

My soul came alive with the touch of your lips

Against my very own

Desire beat from my heart

Through my blood

And every cell in my body

Ignited with raw passion

Never could I get enough of that feeling

I know by the way you kissed me

That you felt it too

And in that instant I realized I love you


© 2012 Chellie



Author's Note

Chellie
Just a quick write showing how I feel about a very special person in my life.
Being in love is such an amazing feeling and I am so happy that I have found it after all this time.

Hope you all enjoy this poem. I didn't put much time or thought into it. I just wrote what came from my mind and heart and this is the end result. Let me know what you think.

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With small-talk gone and void unfilled,
a spot where we’ve all been,
with pounding hear, that’s thrilled.
Staring in those eyes again.

‘And we kissed’—What a powered line.
One that every poet craves.
And tries to draw in their design.
To show the love which passion saves.

A touch of lips, live changing urge
in every body cell.
Ignition of a fire to purge,
all doubt, that I had fell.

The words so hard and yet so true,
so easy now, that I love you


Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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With small-talk gone and void unfilled,
a spot where we’ve all been,
with pounding hear, that’s thrilled.
Staring in those eyes again.

‘And we kissed’—What a powered line.
One that every poet craves.
And tries to draw in their design.
To show the love which passion saves.

A touch of lips, live changing urge
in every body cell.
Ignition of a fire to purge,
all doubt, that I had fell.

The words so hard and yet so true,
so easy now, that I love you


Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely romantic and passionate write! Ah, that magical moment shared with someone we love is timeless and enthralling. Well done and thank you for submitting this to the contest. Good luck!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My heart jumped when I read,
'I stared into your eyes
My heart pounding in my chest'
The raw emotion, spilled so effortlessly in this poem, is the source of some of its strength.
There are few who don't want to or haven't wanted to be in love.
The popular media in our western industrialised culture fetishises this romantic love scenario in which you and your lover became for us the lead actors.
Thanks for letting us all sit there in that car, in the excitation of anticipation too, and also thanks for letting me be a part of the audience!


Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was a very great, passionate work, well done :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ya know, this is how I feel about a very special person in my life is well. Love the write:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was very well written and has absolutely amazing imagry! You should enter this into a poetry contest(: My bets. It would win!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I think its really sweet. And this kind of writing "quick write" and writing with "no thought" is true writing. That writing is the writing that comes from you heart and makes it marvelous. Great job.

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I'm really happy that you found love, it really is a wonderful thing. Beautiful poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I can definitely relate to this poem. Keep up the self-expression.

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Simple and expressive. I liked it.

Only thought I had:
Against my very own - ("my very own" threw off the pace for me. Maybe replace with "mine")



Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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