The Castle: Begining

Take a tour to a castle full of traps and ghosts.

It was believed that there was an enigmatic castle which was haunted. Ghosts were spotted; people were caught by curses. Whoever went in never came out. Thus nobody ever ventured there again.

One day on a sudden evening, two groups of people decided to venture there. They formed a party. The members of the party were Ben, Angus, Margaret, Rex, Gale, Joe, Kenneth and Elizabeth. Some of them were total cowards. They were  sitting down on a field thinking were to go. Suddenly Ben started.

Ben �" I think this adventure we are taking should be horrifying. What do you think Ken?

Ken �" Right! It should be stupid and crazily dangerous. Rex, any idea?

Rex- Lets do what my dad tried to do…

Margaret- Oh-god what’s happening?

Rex- let’s take a visit to the haunted castle!

Gale- that’s stupid. A-and dangerous! I-I-I’m…….

Everybody glared at him.

Gale-I think it’s cool… Lets go tomorrow!

He tried to run away, but Rex caught him.

Rex �"Let’s go tonight!

Author's Note

This is just the beginning of a story.

Reviews

[Harley Rose]

Okay... you need commas before speaking and you need to quit switching back and forth from the format of a story to the format of a screen play... you need to end your speaking with another " and please intent your paragraphs... good story but please edit

[Clive D Costa]

Thats a good comment. i should improve my grammar