Meet Me in the Middle

Meet me in the middle,
not at the end,
not in the beginning,
but right at the bend.

Meet me where the sky
scattered the stars;
where the clouds caught His tears,
and released them as ours.

Meet me where the sea
captured the path of the moon;
where the night's light reflects
nature's silvery spoon.

Meet me where our hearts
join together as one;
when perfect melodies are played  
by the beating of love's drum.

Meet me today,
for tomorrow may not wait;
right now is almost gone,
and yesterday is too late.

 

Copyright ©2008 Danielle Pierre

 

Author's Note

I am overhauling/perfecting all of my old poems. Please, if you think something should be changed, sounds off beat, whatever -- any constructive suggestions are encouraged and appreciated! Thank you!

Reviews

[Michael X]

dani, i love the way you opened this piece, the whole analogy of meeting in the
bend of life, beautiful imagery, employing the starry sky sets the readers heart adrift,
the pondering aspect is passionate, to meet for the day, to embrace the moment
your words have a dreamy, encouraging ambience, the elegant rhyme form is equally
impressive, the images are creative and well defined, blissfully designed, its wonderful
to be able to see the moonlight in words, you've captured desire's gentle touch,

[Ocean Orchid]

Meet me in the middle,
not at the end,
not in the beginning,
but right at the bend.

-- Very appealing .... We all wait for a perfect magical bend in our life ... and u penned down that thought in wonderful rhyming .. GREAT

[Angel's Lady]

Meet me today
For tomorrow may not wait
Right now is almost gone
And yesterday is too late

This is absolutely, stunningly perfect. What a wonderfully written piece you've captured on paper! Great job!

[KAREN BROWN]

wow this is wonderfully written.I really enjoyed it a lot.you brought so much emotions out in this it touched my heart.thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. karen

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

this seems almost to goo to be true!!! how great would it be if someone would meet us in the middle??
i loved it simply because you filled it with passion...

keep it up!


~may

[Forest Green]

Finding safety and happiness in one another's company is the hope of for a true relationship.

You've described this very well.

Good work,

Daniel

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

A very graceful and emotional poem, in true love two hearts come together as one and in doing so compromise and make sacrifices. Very well crafted my sweets.

[Catrinka]

This is perhaps my favorite of all your pieces. Great imagery, with the second stanza being my favorite. Good rhythm to it as well - KUDOS!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Great imagery, this is really such a beautiful piece that each and every word and every line is actually painting a picture in front of my eyes!
And even the flow and rhyme is so impressive and soothing!
Amazing write! :)

[Sally Edwards]

Wow, what a stunning poem, wonderful smooth read, I love it, such gorgeous descriptions, my fave has to be
Meet me where the sea
Captures the path of the moon
Where the night's lights reflect
Nature's silvery spoon

So beautifully perfect.

[None]

Your poem is written so very beautifully! Every word brings such feelings and paints such pictures. Excellent writing!