Vanishing Point

Vanishing Point

A Poem by Delmar Cooper

Vanishing Point

So what do we think?
When we bother at all.
Of staying in straight lines?
Following the uniform in front?
Followed uniformly behind?
Up marble steps hollowed down by those before,
Past sleeping lions heroically carved to guard…
What? From whom?
Taken in perspective, all lines converge.
Until the mind - that willing fool -
Begins its urging. First quietly, in seditious whisper:
“Yes, this is real, real. Simply reach out and touch to feel.”
So convinced, we break away, slip beneath the velvet rope,
Past guards lost in stuporus dreams of cigarettes and coffee.
We know! Truly know what depth is there.
That hands may feel what eyes may see,
So we reach, reach,
Reach until suddenly,  surprised fingers are stopped.
Stopped short by the grain of brush strokes,
Stopped by the taunt bounce of canvas.
Then, oh then, there is the slow walk back
Back into place
Then there is the mourning,
Mourning that unnamed thing, lost.
Lost forever by the act of discovery.

 


© 2014 Delmar Cooper



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Your writing always leaves me with no words. I've read most of your writing but I never have the right words to tell you what is it that I like about it, but this piece right here got to my heart. I know you might have meant to say something else, but this reminded me of a time not far from now when I was still innocent, not because I didn't know of life, I knew many things before all the other children, I was wiser than I should've been. I was innocent because nothing truly bad had happened to me before. This is my favorite piece of writing because of that. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Delmar Cooper

2 Years Ago

" I know you might have meant to say something else," What I mean or don't mean or meant at the m.. read more
Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

I have the same thinking, I like to consider my writing as a gift to whoever reads it. I just told y.. read more



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love the power in the ending. You may take a life tome to discover a thing. However the good/bad news is once learned you cannot unlearn such knowledge.

Posted 1 Day Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Delmar Cooper

1 Day Ago

Thank you for reading and for your thoughtful comment.
I am really enjoying your poetry. You are very talented!

Could you tell me more about what inspired this poem? I'm just curious.

Yari

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Delmar Cooper

2 Weeks Ago

Originally the sound the words made.
Yari Garcia

2 Weeks Ago

Very interesting. Thanks ^.^
Delmar Cooper

2 Weeks Ago

Sorry for the brief reply. Having computer issues here. Originally the poem was much shorter just f.. read more
I've spent the past hour or so reading your works and I've come to really love your style. this piece is definitely one of my favorites though.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Delmar Cooper

6 Months Ago





thank you for reading
A lovely reflective poem. But you know, Mother Nature don't draw straight lines. Also, scientifically all straight lines are curved!(Curved space). As for the 'straight and narrow', well I wonder how many of us don't stray?

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Delmar Cooper

2 Years Ago

Thanks for your comment, and I suppose I do or did know that fact about infinity and straight lines .. read more
Great Aunt Astri

1 Year Ago

I think I agree with you there!
you took me past St George's hall into the art museum and let me touch the rough feel of old painted canvas....................AGAIN!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your writing always leaves me with no words. I've read most of your writing but I never have the right words to tell you what is it that I like about it, but this piece right here got to my heart. I know you might have meant to say something else, but this reminded me of a time not far from now when I was still innocent, not because I didn't know of life, I knew many things before all the other children, I was wiser than I should've been. I was innocent because nothing truly bad had happened to me before. This is my favorite piece of writing because of that. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Delmar Cooper

2 Years Ago

" I know you might have meant to say something else," What I mean or don't mean or meant at the m.. read more
Tomoe Tellez

2 Years Ago

I have the same thinking, I like to consider my writing as a gift to whoever reads it. I just told y.. read more
Way to think for yourself! Well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I don't do well with straight lines or even right angles. I am unreasonable. Go my own way. Discover the illusions of life and become disillusioned. All this I understand. Still, I am pleased by the paintings I have painted. Why should I live in the paintings others painted for themselves just because they all agree? This is, of course, just philosophy. The poem is thoughtful, deep and true. We are herd animals and to return to the flock is what we do. Hermits are few and far between.

Posted 2 Years Ago


although poetry is not revolution it is presumable enough to stand as such. It is writing and typing but
also this intense listening and shaping exercise. I remember that line from the 60's Black liberation
movement, "don't say your a revolutionary if you stop at stoplights at 3 in the morning". Which,
when extrapolated can mean, 'whatever you do, if that adorned with stars, even that of a
starry jeweled night, make the noise different than the other persons noise.

I'm running on.........Sorry.
Great poem....dana

Posted 2 Years Ago


Growth and evolution come from challenging the norm.
Very few are courageous enough to not let society stifle them.
We call them weird social outcasts until they become heroes, innovators.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Delmar Cooper
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Trussville, AL



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