Heart of the Earth

Heart of the Earth

A Poem by Desert Dreamer
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experience out in the desert

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Heart of the tortoise

caged breath

the earth still breathes

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2011 Desert Dreamer



Author's Note

Desert Dreamer
My photo taken at Wupatki Pueblo ruins.

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Your wondrous photo and simple yet descript words not only paint a picture in my soul, but a yearning to go on a dream quest to the desert.

Beautiful!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you for the amazing photo. I like the artwork and the gifts for us from a time from the past.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was great. haiku is not an easy thing to write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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ah brilliant - love hte picture - the tortoise head - the earth breathes indeed! nice!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great photo and fantastic Haiku...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Whatever in the World is that....!!
and yes a lovely Haiku.


Posted 6 Years Ago


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Yes! The Earth still breathes. Wonderful Haiku.
I took a similar photo when i was there a couple years ago. My poem 'The Sentinel' has one of my photos from that trip.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can imagine the energy felt there ...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You can have roots and still have wings... lovely little piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ah, thank you

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Added on July 19, 2011
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Desert Dreamer

Sonoran Desert, AZ



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