Broken

What you did to me

You treated me like rubber

Now i'm just broken

You dropped me like I would just bounce back

Now i'm just broken

You act if nothing's happened yet you know what you did

Now i'm just broken

I was like a mirror, perfect with no cracked

Now i'm just broken

I know I should leave you for what you did

Now i'm just broken

But no one will want be because of your actions

Now i'm just broken

So congradulations if these were your plans all along

Now i'm just broken

I don't even know why I even loved you

Or why I still do.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems, I know there. If you have any ideas how to make this better, let me know.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like how you used the different font and the repeating lines, this is a good write, nice pained emotion.

[Death Girl]

I can really relate to this. you love someone and they hurt you so bad and you are still in love with them or still have strong feelings for them.

[Ibreez Shabkhez]

nice write!

[Ibreez Shabkhez]

Just broken is a paradox.

[Stella Robins]

It's like a songgg

[Luke Ritta]

Amazing write...loved the first line.

[Ryan Miller]

Getting used gets old doesnt it? In regards to the poem, its absolutely beautiful, i can feel the emotion falling of of it. Keep your head up. Your worth more than the way people have treated you!

[idk]

Yes, that's what I was going for. Thanks for the reviews :)

[Seshat Nidaba]

This read to me like a song, it's very vulnerable and martyr-like which did appeal to me somewhat. The repetition of 'now I'm just broken' was really interesting and made the entire piece seem quite emo, which is I guess what you were going for?

[i like people]

i absolutely loved this :]
there were some grammar/spelling issues but whatever, it's still a wonderful poem. i could relate so much.
you can only be used so many times before you just fade away and like, die.