Spread My Wings

Spread My Wings

A Poem by Evelynn

I jumped through hoops
I smiled and lied
I never yelled
I never cried

I never thought 
I never quit
I never wanted
More that this

But, now that’s changed
I’ve seen the truth
I know now
It was you who stole my youth

I won’t stand here anymore
Like your personal puppet on a string
It’s time for me to spread my wings
Despite of everything

© 2017 Evelynn

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That was too deep and strong
May you would always remain the same way

Lovely read!

Posted 5 Months Ago

very rhythmic... sounds kind of song like.. 100pnts!!

Posted 5 Months Ago

This was a lovely piece, a reflection of self, a strong heart and mind. Letting go is one of the hardest things to do.

Posted 6 Months Ago

Simply wonderful Evelynn.
So many great lines. Very memorable

Posted 6 Months Ago

Wow. Very nice expression of feelings

Posted 6 Months Ago

The heart and mind can only take so much before it says...that's enough and moves on.

Nice writing. :)

Posted 6 Months Ago

Wonderfully expressed,moving on in a better direction;-]

Posted 6 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


6 Months Ago

Thank you!

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Added on September 6, 2017
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