Fire, Sparks and Fireworks

It's cheesy... Very cheesy. It's cute though

When I hear your voice 
When I see your name
My body goes up in a blaze
I can not contain

When we speak
When we touch
Between our hands
I feel sparks

When we laugh 
When we kiss
In my head 
I hear fireworks

Can't you see
What you do to me
You make me feel
Like I'm about to die

I'm heating up
Unintentionally
It's not my fault
It's what you do to me

You make me feel
Fire, sparks and fireworks
Just by
A look in your eyes

So please just don't 
Take your eyes away from mine
Because if I can't feel these things
I just might die

All these signs
All these feelings
Are just to let me know
I'm alive.

This fire
These sparks 
These fireworks 
Are just to let me know...

I'm in love.

Author's Note

Did I mention it's cheesy?

Reviews

[jennifer little]

nice work keep it up

[jennifer little]

great and wonderful work loved it keep it up

[ATG]

A pretty good poem. It was a bit cheesy, but it wasn't too bad. Overall, it was good and showed the feeling of love for another perfectly.