My World

My World

A Poem by Giullia King

"Stop thinking about it" He said.
"It's not the end of the world."

"I know" she answered with trembling lips.
"But it's the end of my world."




© 2018 Giullia King



Author's Note

Giullia King
Sunday scribble. Be kind, always.

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This touched me on a deeper level. Really, it does seem like the end of one's world when someone or something you hold dear goes missing...
The photo casts a mesmerizing effect (now that I see it clearly lol) ;)
Nicely penned, Gullia :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words, dear Yumna! I'm happy you liked this one :) Haha, I know you like the.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

You're welcome, Gullia! Always 😊💜
Simple&meaningful. You put the words right.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much :)
Simple, yet Brilliant. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading! :)
very small but very touching I loved this...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

I'm happy you loved it!
This is very good! An enormous concept in a small space, which is always harder for me. My only suggestion would be not to repeat the word 'said' (unless you're purposely going for a 'he said, she said' statement. I think it carries more poetical weight to put, 'she responded', or 'she answered'. Tell me your thoughts :) Thank you for the read request! I.I.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Isabella :)
Isabella Ivy

1 Year Ago

You're most welcome :)
Such a powerful message in so few words ... I feel like the author's note summed it up nicely : )

- William Liston

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you, William :)
This is amazing! 😍
Thanks for sharing

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading! :)
Wow its just amazing gullia😊

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Farhan!
Love it!
:) Sunday writes are often reflective.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Sunday writes are the best :) I'm happy you love it :)
Nice scribble. A lot said in just a few words. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Kathie :)

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