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Give me to the summer breeze

Give me to the summer breeze

A Poem by Gee
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One final walk together

"
It's time my love you lived again
removed the widow's black,
leave sorrow for all yesterday's
invite happiness "come back"

So don a dress of pastel hues
paint a smile upon your face,
walk me for a last time dear
to my final resting place.

Take me to the highest hill
give me to the summer breeze,
to gently fall on green grass, lush,
'neath the shade of aged trees.

No tears though love, enough now shed
lighten your heavy heart,
although I'm now not at your side
we'll never be apart.

And if perhaps ever the chance
come visit, reminisce,
but promise that you'll leave me with
a smile and soft blown kiss.











© 2018 Gee



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Dee
That is truly beautiful. That is exactly how I would love it. Back to nature. And them not mourning me. But walking away with a smile.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Dee

1 Week Ago

So Gee, I did not think it was shite! The total opposite in fact. :)
Gee

1 Week Ago

Thank you..
Dee

1 Week Ago

Your very welcome. I really was lovely. :)
This is how intimate loss should be written about.

It's quite touching in a universally familiar way. This poem works in a fundamental way... and that my friend is no small feat.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Gee

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks David. I think the world would be a far better place if we all would express our love for fam.. read more
Nicely sculpted and touching
Thank you for sharing "Smiles"

Posted 2 Months Ago


Gee

2 Months Ago

Cheers Uday
So touching!Beautifully written!Well done!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Gee

2 Months Ago

Thank you Ms P
This just left a lump in my throat Gee after reading. Beautifully done. It flowed nicely and sounded good reading it out loud. Well done. Good morning.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Gee

2 Months Ago

Good afternoon Christine, thank you
Christine Anne Shaw

2 Months Ago

Good afternoon Gee.
This just left a soft and calm spot in my heart

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gee

4 Months Ago

Thank you Markus
this flows along so gently and is really beautiful :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gee

4 Months Ago

Thank you Stella A
Stella Armour

4 Months Ago

my pleasure
So romantic :) I love your writing!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Gee

6 Months Ago

Thank you Resa
Such beautiful imagery here. You provide comfort in death throughout this piece. Wonderful write :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Gee

7 Months Ago

Cheers Troy, appreciate the review
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BBP
Im pretty sure I've reviewed this before but I do love this peace. So beautiful and you painted death as a final date. Gave me chills, loved it!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Gee

7 Months Ago

Thank you, if I'm allowed favourites amongst my own scribbles this would be one.
BBP

7 Months Ago

As it should be

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Added on July 8, 2015
Last Updated on July 7, 2018
Tags: love, life, death, ashes

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Gee
Gee

Milton keynes, United Kingdom



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