Remnants of happy

Remnants of happy

A Poem by Gee
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Seperation

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All that I kept were memories
and the misery of parting.
You, you added the "y" to ours,
magpie like collected all that glittered,
bubble wrapped, boxed it,
then left me with nothing
but the echo of a slamming door
and heartbreak for company.
Yet still I love you,
cradling nightly your pillow captured scent
as tears wash me into fitful sleep.....






© 2017 Gee



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Superb; short, bitter, powerful.
Made me feel guilty actually so it must be spot on !

Posted 2 Months Ago


Gee

2 Months Ago

Cheers....
Mind and body strong grasshopper --- Always look forward, but never forget.

Still, always look forward.

Well done with this. It truly aroused emotion... and that's the best compliment I could give.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Dave

5 Months Ago

I'm f****n' with you gee. You can be as mean as you wont to me. I'll always trust that you have at.. read more
Gee

5 Months Ago

Lol, you f****r. Have a good day
Dave

5 Months Ago

You too doll face.
Wow. I lived those days once. You captured it exactly.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Gee

7 Months Ago

Cheers Maxwell, luckily never been there...
Oh Gee! Always giving me unique sentiments. It is not one of my favourite writings, yet the words and the way you described how you feel were so beautiful and deep. You never fail to amaze me!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Gee

7 Months Ago

Simple stuff Norah, you are to Kind. Thank you.
Hard hitting, that is exactly how it feels when you are left. Heartbroken and crying yourself to sleep at night. It takes time ......I hope this is fiction and not reality, but in my case it happened. Your poem invoked feelings that I had forgotten.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Gee

8 Months Ago

Aye, it is fiction. Seen a few go through the heartache of seperation, divorce. Never pretty. I'm so.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

7 Months Ago

Come back for a second read. I haven't noticed any scribblings, just poetry Gee.
Most have entertained the company of heartbreak, no matter how unwarranted the presence. Great read.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Gee

8 Months Ago

Cheers Laurierose
This is exactly how it is. I envy those who've never had this wretched experience. To never know the pain and heartache...what bliss. Nicely penned and perfectly precise.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Gee

9 Months Ago

Guess I’m one of the lucky ones. Thank you for reading and commenting
Isnt it always like that? If we are the ones left behind we still yearn for their attention.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Tate Morgan

9 Months Ago

i had my first and only heartbreak at 47. It started me writing
Gee

9 Months Ago

Ah well Tate, something good came out of the heart ache. You wield a talented pen
Tate Morgan

9 Months Ago

Smiles thank you
Whether in it or amongst it, you have captured the essence of a relationship failing in such a way that it feels all too real. Ours to yours and fitful sleep disturbed by all the many thoughts of how it can go so wrong so quickly. Love it.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Gee

9 Months Ago

Hi Lorry, luckily not me.Watching a friend go through the trials and tribulations of separation and .. read more
Lorry

9 Months Ago

My sympathies to your friend.
Yes, I thought the cafe had banned me though, with all the tech.. read more
Oh wow this is so soulful and amazing! Thanks for your vulnerability in this piece!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Gee

11 Months Ago

Cheers.....

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Added on October 12, 2017
Last Updated on October 15, 2017
Tags: Love, separation, loneliness

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Milton keynes, United Kingdom



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