All Your Lies

A French Sonnet

Count and listen to all of your white lies
Throughout the years and into what is now
I hope that it will end with your demise
May it be as wished, if God will allow

No longer will you hide behind your spies
Sink to the very bottom will your scow
Leave your hold will all your most trusted allies
No longer to you shall they bend and bow

May all the world come to see through your guile
May it see total, and you shall not smile

Take back all, swallow all your disguises
Put it in your hole, let it make you choke
Burn all your crafty tools and devises
Repay all whom you made ill with one stroke 

Reviews

[Xyve rrg]

oh what anger and revenge! the poem stirred such feelings within me! Love the top-to-bottom 10 syllables, it's not easy you know... Good write!

[Helena]

A superb write, full of energy and vibrancy and seething
with revenge.
Well done and thank you for submitting
this to my contest! ~ Helena

[Jessica R.]

This is great. The emotion is so very vivid-- it's a perfect example of a war held within. Great job, it's very nicely written.

[London Calling]

Oh wicked!
Thanks for entering it into my contest!
Exactly what I am looking for! :)

[bluessadmood]

Oh so much bitterness at someone or something..
throughout the years and into now,I hope it all end in your demise
They will leave your hold ,your most trusted allies,no longer bend or bow
May all the world forget you and see through you guile,and you never smile
may you choke on your disguises,burn your crafty tools and devices
lovely bitter write,i just loved it
lovely write..