I Love The Night

I Love The Night

A Poem by J.R Schlievert
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The chilling darkness
How I love the night
From the eerie wind
To the cold, bright moon
The night is my playground
I prowl
The night is not an oasis
Its filled with monsters that frighten and scare
The dark
Its just so hypnotic
So damnable
So nefarious
That i could grab your feeble soul and haul it to Hades
I LOVE THE NIGHT
 

© 2009 J.R Schlievert


Author's Note

J.R Schlievert
BE TRUTHFUL, AND POINT OUT ERRORS

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Wow...you set the mood with such a short poem. Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


wonderful imagery...

Posted 14 Years Ago


What a great poem! I love the way that you described everything! I love the night, too! Best time of day-night-whatever! It's unique and beautiful! I really enjoyed reading it! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


hahaha beautiful. unique. its quite unlike anything i've read in a while. you're fantastic, and boy, do i love the night. :P

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the line "The night is my playground." Gives me happy chills. I like this a lot. So quick and easy that says plenty. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


What an atmospheric poem, love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well damn that�s creepy.

(You said truthful)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Dear J.R.,

Wonderful imagery and phrasing. The mood is set nicely. I Like it.

Best regards,

Rick

Posted 14 Years Ago


I loved the darkness, then again that's what I love to read. I thought this write was pretty chilling, and overall great! A+! ☺
~Domo~

Posted 14 Years Ago


The night, mysterious, haunting and unknown, you have captured this essence beautifully. Amazing writing to capture the imagination :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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J.R Schlievert

Queen Creak, AZ



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