Creeping murk

Creeping murk

A Poem by Jyoti_Ablaze






So many screams muffled into silences

Silences that echoed through the walls

Walls that wept blood, night and day

The blood clotted and turned black

As black as her sooty eyes.










© 2015 Jyoti_Ablaze



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A dark and mysterious poem, an ambiguity that allows the reader to read between the lines.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Solar!
Eerie!
Fantastic poem. Very dark, which is great :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
Damn. Downright awesome. Such a dark theme.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind review.
I really liked this.. I don't mean to nail you but, did you forget periods? Comment on this if you didn't and ill stop mentioning it :p

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Same there!
Wolf_Lord

1 Year Ago

Poems are funny things... Really they do not in some instances require punctuation at all. However,.. read more
Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your suggestions..
great work !!!!! i like it ...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind visit, Zunie.
Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Glad, you liked it. :)
zunie frost

1 Year Ago

welcome !!!!!
Let me guess, emotional, and/or physical abuse... dark write, and i like it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

Open for interpretations.
Thank you, Danny.
Dani The Unreviewed

1 Year Ago

you are welcome :)
How such a deeply moving darkness flows through your words, like a misted river. Your thoughts are forged in fire. Amazing rhythm and voice!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your insightful review, Craig. Glad to hear from you!
This could be about emotional abuse and/or physical abuse or just a ghostly vampire/witch-type person - it could be whatever the reader deems it to be. When a piece is open to interpretation, that is the sign of a good writer. Nice job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Melissa for your insightful review!
MelissaAndres

2 Years Ago

You are very welcome!
For me, it reminded me of abuse and how the abused person's voice is never heard. Perhaps it wasn't meant to be so graphic but it spoke to me that way. I always enjoy reading your writings. Keep up the good work :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your insightful review. Means a lot!
Hauntingly graphic. Sets the mood and makes me feel like it's right outside the door. Very good work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Jyoti_Ablaze

2 Years Ago

Thank you! Glad you liked it.

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