Release

Pour out all that is left, 

this emptiness speaks no words,

Just let go of what is holding you, 

Its burning a hole deep in my chest, 

Why do you struggle to be your best,

The aching and the pain,

I know how you feel, I feel it too,

We're surrounded by your sadness, 

A feeling so hollow, but yet so full.

Painful guilt, is all that is left, 

all that will be, here's my last breath,

There goes the sadness, the worry and pain. 

None of this was welcome, 

I was only to blame.

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

This is a really touching poem.

I hope you live your life to the fullest and enjoy each moment.

well done

[Anjali]

Expressing grief through words is the most difficult thing to do, yet your poem does it so easily. Well I liked the way you have crafted this beautiful poem.
Regards,
Anjali

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem had the feel of real life and real emotions. I liked the honest tone and realistic ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Sometimes words can't explain how a person is feeling.. In these times,even emptiness seems to be speaking..howling with pain... I deeply felt the emotions here.. This resonated with me...