Bonfires

Bonfires

A Poem by KeeD
"

(turn your volume down to a mellow low) About time I put out something romantic.For those who've found happily ever after, this ones for you :)

"

Bonfires

 photo Fire_of_Love_by_RedifineMe_zps8b7d3e6d.jpg

 

 

 Days are drifting astray

Light it ablaze, close beside you

Is where I want to stay

On the white sands by the Caspian shores

Looking at the night blend in with the waves

Fragments of shells under our feet

Fearless we lay counting the stars

Bonfires take us away

 

To jazzy skies of grey

Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes

Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours

Love like embers implanted in your cheeks

Your fiery smile in the cool breeze

Romantic music sets the mood to please     

Roaring with the wind, screaming your name

Chase after you through the seven seas

Bonfires take us away

 

To a mystical place where the moon and the sun       

Kiss and exchange glances, summer and winter romances

The life within a glimpse of an eye is an eternal lullaby

Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep

Your presence and essence with absence of doubt

Like a candle on a table shedding warmth out  

Bonfires take us away...

...Towards an endless love

 

 


© 2013 KeeD



Author's Note

KeeD

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

I saw the pic.the title and I KNEW THIS WOULD BE FANTASTIC WORK. There is something magical and romantic about the glow of a bonfire. The smell...the sparks...it inspires the heat of love.

To jazzy skies of grey
Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes
Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours
Love like embers implanted in your cheeks
Your fiery smile in the cool breeze
Romantic music set's the mood to please
Roaring with the wind, screaming your name
Chase after you through the seven seas
Bonfires take us away


I love how you ended every thought with the "Bonfire's take us away" such a fluid read. A favorite.

another thing..Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep" that saying is worth quoting over and over again...dreams and words to live by. xo

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

only tweek...keep reading

...Because we love to the end

maybe instead;
read more
KeeD

4 Years Ago

let me know if this works :3
+she plays with matches+

4 Years Ago

Yes!!



Reviews

Three very lovely poems. So romantic

Your fiery smile in the cool breeze
Roaring with the wind, screaming your name

Love the way these two lines fit together.

Posted 4 Years Ago


You've created such an amazing mood with the photograph and the acoustics that the poem itself was like icing on top of the most sweetest delectable cake.

It is beautiful, romantic, and playful like a slow burning bonfire.

You are an amazing poet and I love your tone in this poem.



Posted 4 Years Ago


Im noticing a pattern, our work seems to be total opposites hahaha, you generally have a gentle or sweet tone to your writing, giving the reaer a warm feeling. And you do well at it, you do welll at displaying emotion and setting the tone. Even your general word choice reflects your warming intent. Great stuff man.

Posted 4 Years Ago


KeeD

4 Years Ago

I write according to my mood heh, I was feeling mad alone and started to dream of an imaginative fix.. read more
Vile

4 Years Ago

Right on. I dig it.
This is fantastic, you always touch me deeply with your poems, they say so much, they have so much pathos, and richness within them:

"On the white sands by the Caspian shores
Looking at the night blend in with the waves
Fragments of shells under our feet"

That is so grounded, so one with eachother and the beauty of nature to embrace you.
Your last lines:

"Like a candle on a table shedding warmth out
Bonfires take us away..."

bring me back memories, from the periode in Italy where I've lived, and we danced, and run all together in the sea at midnight for it was "Ferragosto" manifesto... sigh :) you dance with words, and I can only listen en enjoy! so beautiful, I'm your fan forever! :)

- Elisa

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Elisa, that must have been amazing I've been to Italy only for a day and just stay.. read more

4 Years Ago

Oh fantastic!!! next to "Il Duomo" I lived in Milan too next to the famous church. :) also in Naples.. read more
I think bonfires roar with passion. This poem did that too. It is a beautifully penned love poem, no uncouth cheesy lines, just the perfect words and perfect picture for a perfect piece. This is going to my library cause i definitely love it:-):-):-D.

Posted 4 Years Ago


KeeD

4 Years Ago

I love the way you express it, Roar with passion.. so much emotion expressed in that one line itself.. read more
Poussiere D'Ange

4 Years Ago

:-):-):-D.
Fantastic work Keegan, definitely my favorite of yours. From the surroundings, to the romance, to the music, you captured it all so perfectly in this beautifully written poem. Well done! 100/100

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KeeD

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much < 3
such a beautiful write....perfect music

Posted 4 Years Ago


KeeD

4 Years Ago

thank you so much
Best Romantic poem i ever read bro :)
Enjoyed your work so much .. Keep it up!

Posted 4 Years Ago


KeeD

4 Years Ago

oh wow thank you so much, have an awesome week, be sure to read request me anything you'd like me to.. read more
BlueDreams

4 Years Ago

My pleasure and Sure bro, Same goes to you too :) TC
This...is...beautiful
Nicely penned and flows brillianlty, love it

Posted 4 Years Ago


KeeD

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much, please read request me anything you'd like me to read.
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Love the imagery and rhythm. Jazzy skies, caspian shores, good stuff.

Posted 4 Years Ago



Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

4023 Views
85 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 12 Libraries
Added on February 1, 2013
Last Updated on February 2, 2013

Author

KeeD
KeeD

Mumbai, India, India



About
Hey i'm Kee, 27 years old and come from the culturally blessed land of India. I'm an amateur poet at best and I spill my writes out to music and current emotion. Leave a review and I'll be happy to re.. more..

Writing
Spectre Spectre

A Poem by KeeD



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Our Skin Our Skin

A Poem by KeeD