Bonfires

(turn your volume down to a mellow low) About time I put out something romantic.For those who've found happily ever after, this ones for you :)

Bonfires

 

 

 Days are drifting astray

Light it ablaze, close beside you

Is where I want to stay

On the white sands by the Caspian shores

Looking at the night blend in with the waves

Fragments of shells under our feet

Fearless we lay counting the stars

Bonfires take us away

 

To jazzy skies of grey

Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes

Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours

Love like embers implanted in your cheeks

Your fiery smile in the cool breeze

Romantic music sets the mood to please     

Roaring with the wind, screaming your name

Chase after you through the seven seas

Bonfires take us away

 

To a mystical place where the moon and the sun       

Kiss and exchange glances, summer and winter romances

The life within a glimpse of an eye is an eternal lullaby

Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep

Your presence and essence with absence of doubt

Like a candle on a table shedding warmth out  

Bonfires take us away...

...Towards an endless love

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Muse]

I saw the pic.the title and I KNEW THIS WOULD BE FANTASTIC WORK. There is something magical and romantic about the glow of a bonfire. The smell...the sparks...it inspires the heat of love.

To jazzy skies of grey
Intoxicated by flames reflected in your eyes
Far far away I hide and seek, forever yours
Love like embers implanted in your cheeks
Your fiery smile in the cool breeze
Romantic music set's the mood to please
Roaring with the wind, screaming your name
Chase after you through the seven seas
Bonfires take us away


I love how you ended every thought with the "Bonfire's take us away" such a fluid read. A favorite.

another thing..Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to keep" that saying is worth quoting over and over again...dreams and words to live by. xo

[KeeD]

Haha wow you make me so proud of writing :D Like i'll be honest with you muse, I sit down and go to write something and I honestly don't believe in it until I read the reviews on here and I start to question myself... is it really as good as these amazing people say, I mean wow you make me feel proud to write, thank you!!! I loved that line too "Put me to slee, some dreams I forever want to keep" I hope the poem plants an image or reminds people of their fondest memories of being in love :)

[KeeD]

Oh by the way Muse is the font and music distracting?

[Muse]

hell no...the music is superp..you know my taste...I think. If there was singing...I think it can take away from the poet's words. But it's soft...moody..who is this guy he's fabulous!

[KeeD]

Luis oneto, you can find his music on soundcloud.com, Thank you for being so supportive < 3

[Muse]

only tweek...keep reading

...Because we love to the end

maybe instead;
read moreonly tweek...keep reading

...Because we love to the end

maybe instead;

because we will love until the end?

or becaues we love until the end....sorry...grammar is not my thing...can't help but think it's missing a word.

[KeeD]

let me know if this works :3

[Muse]

Yes!!

[Saichiro Wolftotem]

The subject matter is good and has a lot of promise, but I'm having problems with the meter staying consistant. It doesn't need to be drab, you can change it up, but especially in a poem this long it needs to be consistant.

[Krithika Raghavan]

Loved the parts in red especially. This reminds me of another poem written by a delightful girl a few months ago... So wonderful and kinda soothing....
What I really love about this is the feel and the capacity of this poem to make me remember things that have happened in my life. well done~

[Toni]

This is so very beautiful, I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing c:

[Samantha Scythe]

Once again, beautiful. When I read this I picture two people who have had a troubled past, in love with each other forgetting everything about the world. This is just like a 'warm' feeling poem, the kind that makes me smile while reading and makes me feel fuzzy inside. Needless to say, I love it!

[Overrated-World]

Such a awesome write. Tells a peaceful love story,

[Priscilla Sayers]

Beautiful romance. Great piece!

[Kelsey]

Wow, this is so incredibly beautiful. I'll admit I'm a sucker for a good love poem, and this was far beyond that. It was beautifully written, it had a lovely flow, and it set off a mood that really put me at ease. Great job, I think you really accomplished what you were going for with this poem.

[KeeD]

Thank you so much Kelsey ~ I love your style of writing too, you're a story teller and you do it beautifully through a poetic form and that's the kind of writing I truly appreciate. Hope you have someone special in your life to share a bonfire with someday < 3 xoxo.

[Kelsey]

Thank you so much, honestly, it means the world. I hope the same for you. xo

[C.C. Marx]

Very romantic, mames me wish i had that special someone though I must say, bonfires have always freaked me out haha.......nicely done

[KeeD]

Haha they're scary I'll admit but there's something beautiful about the warmth and surroundings they encompass. If you felt the need to have someone special after reading this my job as the author of this poem is accomplished :D thank you for your kind review. :)

[C.C. Marx]

My pleasure of course :)

[RoxelanasDream]

Wow. I felt like I was just reading a first person point of view in a scene where usually in romantic movies is the part where all the girls go like AWWWW I wonder if my bf or the person I love ever thought that while with me at least once. And the picture with the poem, correlating it both together, the poem's imagery and the pic kind of gives off how this pic shows what his thoughts are in his mind. Giving it a sort of reality. And fire has such great symbolism to eternal love or desire. However, it can also relate to blindness to the consequences that are ahead. Oh and we know how we always end up having that. :) Lovely write.

[KeeD]

Haha so true :) instead of sitting by the fire we get thrown in it face first, ch'yeah thanks life!
Thank you for your awesome review was looking forward to you reading it :D. I was the girl going AWWWW in this situation wondering if the entire WC feels the same way lol

[RoxelanasDream]

Haha. It's such an amazing thought when u know there are billions of people that are different than us but in the funniest ways we are just alike. Haha this reminds me Valentine's Day is coming up. OH lawd. PDA errwhere soon. lol :P

[Mary Christabel George]

Great work. Speacialy the line "Put me to sleep, some dreams I forever want to Keep".

[KeeD]

Thank you :) this is a dream I haven't experienced yet, I wrote this after a really hard break up so this was my escape, this is what I imagine love to be like :)

[Mary Christabel George]

ya.. It lands up making one a writer and a genuine one seriously. Anyways It was a great job :-)