Eternal

Eternal

A Poem by MOON





Pack up the pieces of my heart

Brown leather suitcases apart

Wind blowing changes rattles the bones

Undressed here I stand all alone

 

On this journey what awaits me

Some things they say will never be

You won’t listen foot on the stair

Run away all too hard to bear

 

Then I see your face yet again

In love where we all stand

Grace the siren song of this soul

Beauty here I am here I’m whole

 

There was never just you and I

Love’s forever it does not die


© 2016 MOON



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"On this journey what awaits me"

These words, I am sure catch anybody's attention. When we stop and look at things, this is the ultimate reality. Yet, the journey goes on...

Posted 8 Months Ago


"On this journey what awaits me
Some things they say will never be
You won’t listen foot on the stair
Run away all too hard to bear"

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thanks again Sami
accidently rated this lower than i wanted.

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thanks for stopping. cole always appreciated.
I read a poem a little while ago that was very similar to this. It had a very playful verses and then delivered on that great ending couplet. I am glad you have not left MOON.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Pax
Ahh, romance and its essence.... suc deeply woven piece my friend... love is eternal they say....

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thanks Pax for stopping by. Keep well dear friend.
Sigh, so beautifully romantic......the longing is evident, the outcome is hopeful with words that true love never dies! And the image is absolutely perfect with the twisting round the trees.

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thank you , kindly
Beautifully romantic write. Filled with longing for one who is no longer with you. Your faith you will meet again is intense. Lovely work. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Many thanks , Lydia go well
Really well written romantic piece. Lovely rhythm. I feel an angst, over something lost and waiting to be retrieved.

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Many thanks , thanks for stopping by.
Outstanding work and those last two lines are so deeply profound.

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thanks you, so appreciative of your time.
Love may sting when cut, the string. Yet memory fadeth not, nor sweet embraces come to naught.

Posted 1 Year Ago


MOON

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much.

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